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Long ago, A demon Lord ruled the realm and after wrecking havoc and chaos to the world he was defeated. But soon after hundreads of years have passed, a man named Josh from our world was transported to the said realm soon after an incident happened to him at work and finds himself in a vast unknown forest.
The question now is: Why is he transported to that world?
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Ok so I have not read that far but i still tihink its better than allot of other novels out there. the only thing that drives me absolutly nuts are the tnse swaps. We are in the past, oh now we arrived at the present so.. no back to past. It is annyoing and I am goona drop your novel for some time hoping to pick it up again either fixed or on a day where I am more motivated.
An interesting story. I can see that you have an idea in your mind, so follow it! You're doing stunning job and I absolutely don't want to discourage you, on the contrary, I encourage you to make some minor corrections... I just wonder what language do you translate from, because sometimes what you write doesn't sound like english... Just pay more attention to language. Happy New Year!
The plot of the story is interesting and seems promising. Well done with character development. One thing I would suggest is that you should try to improve the flow of your story as at some parts it seems a bit awkward/off. But overall, great job!
The Pros: - Josh is a well rounded protagonist. Unlike some other protagonists in books, he is not some "anime fan/otaku, gamer, NEET, person who had a tragic life, or is so called average." Even if Josh was an average person, the author did a good job at showing rather than telling. - At the moment, the main setting does invoke curiosity, we can see how things are and the people (or creatures) that live there via Josh's interactions - So far Josh is doing what he can to survive in this whole new world. I like that he's not some chosen one or somebody who immediately needs to be a hero. The Cons (what I think needs improvement) - At first the story is in third person but then shifts to first person, and it's still the same character: Josh. It's clear that Josh is the protagonist but I think one type of POV style is enough. - There's not much to say about the world itself, what makes it unique than other fantasy worlds in other novels, but I believe we will see that in future chapters. Also, as much as there's the phrase Medieval Europe to describe castles/buildings, there's bound to be other novels going through that medieval style. If there was even more description it be more detailed than general information. - How Josh dies and gets transferred to the new world. I'm grateful that it's not another truck or whatever, but I think it's best to show us a little but more about Josh, who he was before he died, and if he died overworking, it might make sense if his immunity system was weak, or if he was a workaholic. - It's nice that Josh has awareness that he is dead and is in a new world, but I doubt he is that ignorant of his previous life on Earth. Hopefully there's moments of him reflecting that in future chapters. It's a okay novel overall. Readers should at least give this a shot.
I am really intrigued by the plot and the parallel universe built by the author. very well written and the story has a flow. Congratulations on a job well done. Will definitely read more
I would, wholeheartedly, recommend this book. It has a dramatic and really fantastic start, leaving you with so many questions about the plot and what will happen later in the book. I love the characters, the girl especially who is really quirky and has great dynamics with the lead. The way the Author writes is really smooth, descriptive, and it flows really easily. There were a couple of times I would have liked to see a bit more dramatic emphasis on events, but that's a minor preference. Definitely staying as one of my favourites, I am excited to see how the plot progresses as I read more.
The premise of the book is really interesting; kind of reminded me of Greek mythology. The cover is a definite plus. It immediately caught my attention. Coming to the story, the story develops in an interesting and entertaining way. Keep up the good work.
Another isekai book to read 🥰 Nice. Writing quality. There are minimal g-errors but not really noticeable much and don't hinder your reading enjoyment. The narratives are easy to read. Stability of updates. I've seen no problems here. Story development. Flows smoothly. It has the isekai theme but the author makes it unique with his interesting plot and development. Character Design: All the characters have their own personas. You also will not get bored with the male lead with the narration of his thoughts. World background: Detailed and clean. The author knows how to show and not just simply tell with info. dumps. Overall a great read already! Keep it up, author! Greatly recommended if you are looking for refreshing isekai stories.
please leave a review and sorry for some errors I made, I'm still fixing it😅 but please leave a review or comment, vote if you like. Thanks in advance 😘
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I'm just here to post a star review, not to make any commentaries at all. hahaha, anyway. hope this helps you increase your rating. Goodluck on your work
The story is interesting, but for some reasons, I think you need to make it more like appealing that every time a reader reads a line or two they will get hooked on it. :) But the story itself is good.
I love the picture as a cover page, but miss the title and an author ;) Interesting story and intriguing characters. You're doing well! Happy New Year!
Storyline is very good. My interest is piqued. Will definitely follow this work through. Must improve in grammar and punctuation marks but those are just minimal and can easily be improved in the next chapters. Overall, very good! Keep it up!
Just so you know, I prefer Josh POV rather than a third POV. There's an element of details and description in there unlike the former. You crypted him well author. I think I read a similar book somewhere about an MC experiencing lack of sleep due to stress, then he got transmitted to another world. But if I may suggest, I would like you to put more descriptive emotions and body language rather than generalizing your character's feelings. And be extra careful with your choice of words. I don't mean it as a bad thing, mind you, it's just that it may mislead your readers from the main point of your story. Believe me, your story has potential. Your character's personality is amusing. He's quick to adapt and flexible. You did a nice job there author! Keep up the good work!
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed!