Webnovel Author: Bylunarose - Novel Collection

3yr

Posted

I really liked the description of the book and poor and rich couples are such a great read. It's nice to see how the worlds collide and they fall in love despite the struggles they face and that alone makes this book interesting. I also love the character and we love the representation of different Asian races because a lot of people only know Korean or Japanese. This really helps shed light on more than just that. Looking forward to how their love story develops even more.

The Unpredictable Game of Love

Urban · clarixass

Bylunarose

3yr

Posted

I enjoyed the way the backgrounds and things are described. It really helps imagine what your trying to portray. I also happen to like Tristian a bit more than the lead character lol. Although I did catch some grammar mistakes nothing bad enough to make the story unreadable and I think the story goes at a fast pace but not too fast to be like 'woah'. Overall it was good though and you should keep it up.

Dreams and Ashes

Urban · tarastone_

Bylunarose

3yr

Commented

That's what they all say

"She's not my girlfriend".

Dreams and Ashes

Urban · tarastone_

Bylunarose

3yr

Commented

They 'bout to get freaky? okayyyy I see them lol

Ryder came by Shannon's side and gave her a very long very wet kiss on the lips .She moaned and wrapped her legs around his torso .

Dreams and Ashes

Urban · tarastone_

Bylunarose

3yr

Commented

Should have run and then called the police

The man who pulled his hair back smashed his head forcefully on the mortar floor. My eyes filled up with tears out of fear and terror. I took out my phone to call the police but in the process my hand hit a metal rod nearby which fell down making me jump. I looked up terrified and saw their eyes on me clutching my phone. " Aaron get her, she might have called the damn cops " one of them said. I turned around and ran but in moments two huge arms snaked around my waist and I was lifted off the ground . I screamed and hit his back and dug my nails into his skin.

Dreams and Ashes

Urban · tarastone_

Bylunarose

3yr

Commented

That sounds beautiful asf

My favourite part of town was the bridge , I've never seen a more beautiful sight than the one I've seen from there. Two mountains parted by a river,like two lovers who are forever separated by time, always reachable yet so unreachable. The wind blew my hair in all directions and I tried to comb it with my hair. It was getting dark so I started to walk back home .

Dreams and Ashes

Urban · tarastone_

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