no prob
ch 0 3 The Calm Before the Storm (2) - 2
Fantasy · WorthyAdversary
The overall storyline is really creative and nice. Keep up the good work. I haven't read a lot but I'm sure the book is nice from the little that I've read so far.
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Like when you have said stuff like (N/A- I haven't mentioned why in the cover the sister has white hair. She hasn't awakened yet.) And your explanations of how you are trying to execute the plot. I don't think that is necessary.
ch 0 3 The Calm Before the Storm (2) - 2
Fantasy · WorthyAdversary
Happy to be of help!
The Most Satisfied Reincarnate
Fantasy · DragonKnov