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Or will she return later :3
He saw a bronze-skinned woman walked past him. She was likely part Demi-human as shimmering lizard scales covered her abs and arms, like natural armour. Asmodeus had yet to awaken his instincts as an adult male, or he may have pounced on her.
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
While I find your opinion unique and a good point. Politicians are useless garbage, especially in a world ruled by the church and monarchy. Tell me why does having control of the ENTIRE country from its very soil to the buildings. How is it inferior to only renting the land as a normal king/politician? All those things you point out butchering/corrupting are easily done as a dungeon-lord? You're making things that are unrelated and linking them for no reason.
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
It stated at the end of chapter 5 that the system was going to randomly teleport him to a suitable location.
ch 0 7 Chapter 6: Nightmare Mode?
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
I had some but lost em. Will add one when writing the character chapter
The only reason they brought Chloe was her innate gift and to comfort them on dull evenings, even if she looked like that. Her former vibrant amber eyes were now dim and lifeless, her body filled with scars from what seemed to have been torture from long ago.
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
He's in crazy hate mode. Not simp mode in remake. Not yet seen any of her differences.
"Now they will both show up in three years. I can kill her before his very eyes. I can finally stop hiding the sheer disgust that she makes me feel inside my chest."
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
Haha no her mother is German and has a German name. :3
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She will be even more yandere because of the memories and mutating intona demon.
ch 0 -1 Questions For Rewrite
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
No problem will make sure to improve the writing for the two. Your opinions are much appreciated especially the Lumina and battle ones!
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
Won't mention it again sorry. Was more a passing joke than serious comment. Will take this though into consideration in future with heroines!
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
The gauntlets transform into the weapons. Despair still mace and the white gauntlet is named Malevolence now and is a katana
Chapter 1: Truth Of The World. (Part 1) [Rewrite]
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
Yeah, I felt the same in rewrite so he's sped up taking the reigns. Now even the system's control if his desire for women is gone. She will offer advice at most and I won't delay his romance with chloe and Agatha this time.
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
I will try to make the climax satisfying for as many as possible. They won't instantly make up but he will discover the truth before going too far and losing the sweet girl that only ever had him within her heart. Right until the moment the church crushed her soul and replaced it.
1) Should Lumina eventually be forgiven
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
Thank you. I will definitely make her one. :3 Mindbreak the succubus
2) Should the succubus' wife be a virgin (some people feel strongly about this?) I believe she could use illusions and eat mana/vitality from dreams if we go the virgin route.
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
It's the ultra thicc half dwarf. But lewd nuns are indeed justice.
3) Is Anya being super thicc justice? Or Justice?
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
I will continue my research into battle tactics and formations then! Haha
4) Do you want to see a more super op Asmodeus fighting solo against hordes? OR would you like more large tactical battles using his monsters and generals in battle with a few cool, intense duels?
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
He's the best father figure after Kent. Might help him avoid becoming a psychopath too.
5) I will keep Olaf the viking. I am sure you have no problems. Should his wife be dead or cursed? What is your opinion?
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
I honestly love Lumina and the fact this new one wants to atone for her other selves is part of the reason I want to save her. Please forgive me if there is a conflict between the two, I will try to make it satisfying for both sides of the discussion!
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
It's not worth the stress. Would rather split my time and focus on the rewrites quality and not rush it.
Chapter 1: Truth Of The World. (Part 1) [Rewrite]
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
But they wouldn't. He isn't a god, and the system is only a lesser god. She's the reincarnation of a true god after all... But I will consider it.
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Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
It's not OP anymore ):
This was because the system found his mind to be slightly naïve and didn't wish for another host to be destroyed by women. Eventually, it would slowly allow his mind to mature in a long wait for him to become the true Demon Lord.
Oni! Demon Lord
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea