Blim_BlueDust - Profile

Hopefully the story produces content soon. I will check back later

I picked this book up hoping it was going to be a brilliant read. trying to read it was a problem for my eyes. Trying to listen to the story was a problem for my ears. The premise of the story could be amazing, it failed in its execution by having such limitations as bad grammar, confusing sentences that merge several ideas. Hope you get an editor because I look forward to reading the story

this rework of an already popular theme and not an original story there is little value in this story .I was hoping for something interesting, was disappointed .😭

The opening chapters in this book screams you need to read this adventure. I love the premise of the main character struggling with what defines family, how to keep them safe, how to reconnect with distant family, kith, and kin. The story explores what it means to be responsible for the development and safety of those who trust you. I like that the main character does not follow a cookie cutter prescriptive formula for character development. The mc is forward thinking and reflective about their own way to develop. I am eager to read more material from this author! [img=update]

Love the main character and his struggle with circumstances. Looking forward to seeing this book have tons more chapters. The quality of writing makes it worth rereading many times. Definitely need more support from readership [img=update]

I look forward to reading more from this author about the main character and this particular universe. the story so far as well thought out, the character is not a hidden weak to strong archetype. Rather, he uses the abilities he is given to make the most of the situation. When given lemons, I suspect the main character would open a lemonade franchise.

Interesting world building, the characters have flaws that allow us to relate to their obsessions and quirks stronger. I like the story and am waiting for the author to return to actively writing.