And by the way, it's not necessarily be "My eyes fixed on Danton"... This small line is up to you
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HeroiBadadep
5 years ago
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It's a no problem pal
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HeroiBadadep
5 years ago
Replied to HeroiBadadep
"As I heard *him* say"
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HeroiBadadep
5 years ago
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Another suggestion my friend for the first few lines. I hope you don't mind ahehe... "My eyes fixed at Danton, I got shocked as I heard.... *and so on*" Btw, I enjoyed reading this from the start
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HeroiBadadep
5 years ago
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A suggestion for the stuttering part. Instead of putting dots, why not "I-I" and "Wo-Won't"
A story of hardships, showing the cruel, unhandled realities of the world.
Just like any other kid, Hanuzuki Hanzaki was once a playful, cheerful, energetic and a loving child. Yet as time passed by, he began to slowly change due to the influences that surround him, being in a place and living a life full of shaming and adversities.
One night, on his 11th grade, the Hanuzuki Residence was being quite rowdy. Hanzaki suddenly went rushing out of the house. Followed by his exit, his father was yelling while pointing a finger to him at the door.
Alone in the night, he wandered around in hoping to find a solution to his long decade miseries, but little did he know there were serious complications awaiting him.
From one major obstacle to another, he broke through against all odds and faced a life life-changing event that may change the whole world at the end.
Whatever lies ahead, the future would vary depending on his decisions.
Note:
*Original cover picture not mine. Credits to the rightful owner.
*Will be changing it.
And by the way, it's not necessarily be "My eyes fixed on Danton"... This small line is up to you