thank you for reading! I'll have two more chapters out on friday!
ch 13 Changes
Fantasy · Devlin_Powers
Super hype!
"With this, I will rename you from Gaël Skye to Gaël Brand and you will become my will to bring order to this world, you will become a King of King's, a Hero of Heroes, I look forward to watching your growth."
Fantasy · Starrk71
Maybe she regresses to allow him a more solid foundation? That way it plays into the cultivation aspect? Good exposition though!
"My offer to you is to give you a new life. I'll regress your age by a couple of years to give you a better start to train your strength to survive in this world. You will be trained by me personally for a couple of years before you set out for a better start in life. You will also receive my blessing as a limiter on your power. If I were to let you roam around, someone of our blood and talent in our world would be destroyed before we know it."
Fantasy · Starrk71
It might sound a tad bit better as "wariness began to settle across my face then, but" Love the warmth the goddess is portraying so far though!
Wary started to sit in my face but she just smiled ever so calmly. Waiting for my response.
Fantasy · Starrk71
that was kind of my idea. you see a lot of stories were the Mc can form contracts with spiritual beasts, and I wanted to make that be a thing from the start with the mc's puppy. :)
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Fantasy · Devlin_Powers