Webnovel Author: SeverusMagicus - Novel Collection

Thanks for your review. I’ll try to fix the grammar mistakes as much as possible. Have a nice day.

Good story, author did well when writing the story line. The characters are well explained and there are many details in the story which makes the book good.

Thanks for the review have a nice day

Hello everyone! I’m editing some chapters to fix the missing details of the story and also creating some connection between the chapters. Have a nice day.

You are so right about the improvements, thanks for your help Jo_j!

Thanks I will try to fix them as much as possible. Have a nice day.

The story is really good, really powerful. The story telling and also the characters are all very well designed. You should read this novel.

First of all the novel is really interesting. It has a good story and also a great character representation. You should read this novel. Also I have to say that author is always trying to improve the story, you can see it with the author comments and other things. Keep up the good work!

When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

The story is really great. Author’s writing style is also really good. The story line on the other hand is magnificent. You should read this book.

Thanks for your review, I’ll try to make it as good as it is like that in every new chapter. Have a nice day.