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3. Dragon Ball (Its kinda makes sense to go for that)

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

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-No, Shawn should stay out of UA! (Vote here for no)

Why Bother Being a Hero?

Why Bother Being a Hero?

Anime & Comics · sonicpanda1_2507

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The writing quality is quite good but there is no character development. This got boring very fast. Interactions between characters feel "unnatural". Even if you want to pass time reading this you will get bored very fast.

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The author is very talented and clearly has experience. All of his stories are top middle tier. I recommend people to read these because these are better than 90% of garbage on this platform. Excellent story development, good but not best dialect I'd say 7.5/10, 6/10 on the relationship realism and overall common sense which is way better than some of the crap on this app that tops charts. The world background is very good 8/10, character development is I'd say 6.5/10. The problems with the authors's works are the hard focus on jaune arc and rwby, which I don't mind but it would be better to see something else. Another thing is I'd like to see the author make a non OP fic and based on another universe. The op ness of the Mc makes for a semi bland fic that makes fights feel bland. I'd say to refine your action scenes a bit more because in my opinion that is your weak point. Refine the character developments and introduce a bit of realism even if it is anime realism in your works to make the work feel a bit more alive. I wholeheartedly support the author don't be discouraged by my ratings and I hope you continue to improve

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