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The character of Severus is complex but I want to have the character grow with my writing so knowing the relation between James and him i decided to do it like this. I don't believe that the relation between Lily and Snape was cut off so easily as saying "mudblood" just one time. There is also his jealousy of Sirius for his family.
"Oh, look at this. A blood traitor," he sneered, surely referring to Sirius.
Peverell's Legacy: The Tale of Hadrian Peverell
Book&Literature · Zozo_77
Hey sorry it was meant to Grindelwald, in the first édition I maked this point as a blank to be able to place the name and at the correction i put Voldemort automaticaly thank you
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Peverell's Legacy: The Tale of Hadrian Peverell
Book&Literature · Zozo_77
It's not easy per say but i haq something to with the rewrite of rhe chapter three
After finding my perfect wands, I decided to erase Mr. Olivander's memory using a memory charm that I had seen in I made my way to the Apothecary, eager to select the potion ingredients I needed for brewing some powerful potions. As I browsed through the shop, carefully selecting the herbs and powders that I didn't already possess in my trunks or the Black Castle, I came across some rare ingredients that I knew would come in handy. I added them to my basket, along with a few vials of ready-made potions, just in case those in my possession broke.
reborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)
Book&Literature · Zozo_77
thanks you for the review and pointing the plot i forgot about it, I will try to rewrite the first 6 chapter when i will have more experience
"My name is Penelope Clearwater," she introduced herself. "I'm a fourth-year Ravenclaw. What house are you hoping to be in?"
reborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)
Book&Literature · Zozo_77
I know but the world is cruel and the war will start soon I wanted him to get accustomed to killing earlier, as an assassin in his previous life it's no problem for him. The world of Naruto is often over-simplified in my view, so killing so early draws a parallel to Itachi which was shown on the battlefield. I'm not very good at writing emotion too so I don't want my mc to be an overly sentimental character
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Reborn as Nagato(hiatus)
Anime & Comics · Zozo_77
The academy three are the easiest, for the henge i just made him do a shell of chakra and for the katon it came to me like that, thank you for the review thought. In the future chapters i will try to explain how the technique work by comparing it to another and why he was able to do it without knowing too much so thank you.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
Reborn as Nagato(hiatus)
Anime & Comics · Zozo_77
I am not sure but i think it will become a harem
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 First Day
reborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)
Book&Literature · Zozo_77
I am not sure as of this moment
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
Reborn as Nagato(hiatus)
Anime & Comics · Zozo_77
haha you will see a new chapter will come soon, i only hope that i had written it in a good way.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
Reborn as Nagato(hiatus)
Anime & Comics · Zozo_77
I will try :)
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Peverell's Legacy: The Tale of Hadrian Peverell
Book&Literature · Zozo_77