Webnovel Author: Reaper_2985 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

the fic is great I finished it in a day it was that much interesting, the oc characters are involved and aren't over bearing but I would have like the mc name to be more cool like toji or satoru or shiki or sora and I would hope mc gets ability to learn jutsu faster as it would be more interesting and I would also love to see original jutsu rather than Rasengan to used as its often used in every Naruto fiction. love to see u finish the fic

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

Reaper_2985

1mth

Posted

it's basically boring without any plot it's wishfullment with arrogant MC with plot armor is everyone listen to him he doesn't even plan it he says it and everyone starts bowing to him basically the third hokage giving him flying thunder god just because he asks for it.

The Strongest Naruto

Anime & Comics · JustaLazyGuy

Reaper_2985

1mth

Commented

what a hypocrite the story getting boring and it has no future making a proper plot

ch 43 Chapter 42 - Chuunin Exam(13)

The Strongest Naruto

Anime & Comics · JustaLazyGuy

Reaper_2985

2mth

Commented

yah seems unlikely that king of wakanda would ever allow or be nealing in front of someone else they throw logic out when it comes to pride, no matter how techno God he is if wakanda don't fear God's or Thanos then u got no chance but you have to make your power look dominant one what can I say it's just won't happen In marvel like advance version of ultron taking down wakanda ya u can massicare them but not make them go against What they are pridefull and belief in the God which is magical in nature magic trumps technology any day

ch 24 Technomancer in MCU #20

Technomancer in MCU

Movies · IdleMuse0307

Reaper_2985

2mth

Commented

lemon s are fine and u do a good job of it writing but may it gets boring but u do u

AN: Some readers don't like lemons and yet they are reading and complaining.😅 I mean, after all the tags and the mentions of what to expect in the first chapters + The mention of Slice of life in the Author's note in bold letters, why complain? My stories are all slow and focus on each day and every character as they go through daily life. I take my time with sex scenes and relationship development. Some sex scenes spans over 3 chs. I write everything in details. I thought it was clear by now. Anyway, don't comment if you don't like slow pace or harem, just leave.

Spider-Man 0X

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Reaper_2985

2mth

Commented

bullying only works when u let it or u don't have friends but beating up a guy when you're super powered doesn't that is worse than that it's called assault and miss use of power, the writer try to justify it but he just wants to f**k his girlfriend and sister so no point giving justification. actually Flash is well written character in ultimate spiderman fanfic writers just go over the top

"Get up!! I'm not done yet!!" The hooded guy picked him up again and dragged him under the light post where his bike was lying, "Look!!" He pointed at Flash's reflection in the mirror attached to his bicycle. Flash could barely recognize himself, half of his face was swollen and bruised, nose broken, lips cut, bleeding profusely. "You think this is bad, right? You think the pain you are feeling is enough, right? Huh?" He smashed Flash's head on the mirror. "Well, guess what!! This is nothing compared to what Peter Parker must have gone through every single day!! Do you understand?" He smashed Flash's head on the mirror again breaking it to pieces, "DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW MANY LIVES YOU DESTROYED? HOW MANY STUDENTS GOT MENTALLY SCARRED AND ARE NOW IN THERAPY SESSIONS? HOW MANY BRIGHT FUTURES GOT FUCKED UP THANKS TO YOU?? DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT!?"

Spider-Man 0X

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Reaper_2985

3mth

Commented

I don't think hakari would lose to current mc let's be honest , but it's your story I can't say anything about the fight

ch 29 Chapter2️⃣6️⃣ - Goodwill Event 2017 (4)

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

Reaper_2985

3mth

Commented

for ashura path instead of random weapons make it so he can use 6 paths weapons that Buddha uses from records of ragnarok 2 it would be more convenient

ch 0 9 Asura Path

Rinnegan in JJk

Anime & Comics · David_555

Reaper_2985

3mth

Posted

one of the best. it has potential. and chapters could be longer3

Jujutsu Kaisen: Butterfly effect.

Anime & Comics · Fuck_the_harems

Reaper_2985

8mth

Commented

they can also fuse together and make a new type of shikigami like agito fusion of nue and divine dogs it's from recent chapter so and explain rest like rabbit, modoka deer, max elephant, toads, ox, don't know the rest

ch 0 -1 The Ten Shadows Technique: A General Explanation

Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto

Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes

Reaper_2985

9mth

Commented

author is really funny with his words like limitless, eternal, unlimited or ultimate. cute 😅🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣, how can someone measure unlimited speed like tell me how fast he is not how long he can run etc, but really cute writing can't wait to read first chapter

ch 0 -3 List of Power

The Ultimate Doomsday (Marvel/DC)

Anime & Comics · Rex_Zatch

Reaper_2985

1yr

Replied to okmandudesame

Sasuke would be way stronger than cannon if itachi trained him

Itachi was a cool character in the series, but he was stupid in some aspects. Cause if he was so talented, and he cared so much about his brother Sasuke. Then why not just take the kid and leave the village that stole on of your friends eyes. Fuck the clan and the village that treats Naruto the son of a Hokage like shit.

Naruto : Tales of Obito Uchiha

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

Reaper_2985

1yr

Commented

but there are many things about sukuna would make story go wrong

ch 0 5 chapter 4 Training

JUJUTSU KAISEN : JUGAN

Anime & Comics · Reaper_2985

Reaper_2985

1yr

Posted

I don't get it what's it about raising children it's less about adventures and more about slice of life it gets boring very Fast

Is it Wrong that I Woke Up in Danmachi as the Main Character?

Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory

Reaper_2985

1yr

Posted

Great work really great but it can be awesome if he wrote clearly. But hey awesome storyline and not some smut feast

With The Sharingan In The MCU

Movies · RetMod

Reaper_2985

1yr

Commented

Just use coconuts for rubber ball and for balloon use the soft stuff inside the coconut it is round and isn't durable like outer shell.

'But, if I want to completely master it'll be a long and hard journey, and all of that because of the stupid reason that during this time period there are no da*n balloons or rubber balls to help my training, sigh, I guess I can only go about it the old fashioned way, Minato was able to create it and master it from scratch in 3 years so that's the most it's gonna take me.'