thank you for your constructive criticism.
ch 0 6 Fate and destiny
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Thank you again. But does that cost money? If it does, please don't buy it. Even if one person reads my novel. I am more than happy.
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I am very happy to hear that. I was going to write another chapter anyway, since I have some time now. Please feel free to correct any mistakes you encounter (My grammar is horrible). Thank you for the power stones. (I actually don't know what it does)
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thank you. I have corrected it, I rounded it to 100 th part to make simple comparison.
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I will take it as a complement that it seems real 🥲
ch 0 6 I only lie three times
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No in real life i don't think it is this easy right? probably?
ch 0 6 I only lie three times
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the only thing i feel sorry for is why am i not in his place
Yu Tian felt like he was an object that had just been sold off.
Urban · Sixth Master Of Eastern Mountain
I understand what you are saying but, in my cultivation world, it is possible to body cultivate without cultivating Qi. Even in martial arts there are many ways to make your skin tough. Similarly, in my world, it is possible by nurturing your body with lots of heavenly resources. But the process is too painful and costly for anyone to even try. As for the woman with phone, she is a potential harem, I just wanted to build a good connection. I do believe it is cliched and i failed to write it in such a way that it didn't seem so. If you are satisfied with my explanation i will add this to the body cultivation part. Thank you again.
ch 0 6 Fate and destiny
Saiyan in Xianxia
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