Webnovel Author: Gre_y - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I kind of have mixed feelings about this novel so bear in mind, this is your trigger warning. I get that he's been broken after 1000 lifetimes worth of suffering but that still doesn't justify sexually assaulting, r*ping, and treating the woman as an object. This is the kind of novel where you shut your brain off to read, don't read this if you get easily triggered. Also, please stop justifying r*pe as normal plz, it's just not right.

I hope you recover fast Suiyan. Hopefully this heartfelt review from me speeds it up hehe. **SPOILERS*** Writing Quality: 5/5. Nothing wrong that I can say about Suiyan's writing. One of the few authors on Webnovel that can actually write in proper English. I have gotten to the latest chapter and I have not spotted any grammatical or even if there was it hasn't distracted me :). Stability of Updates: 5/5. Used to be 3 a day until heath issues (´Oƪ). Now 2 a day but hey, I'm not complaining (maybe just a little). I can't believe you can still keep up with the daily chapters, you have my respect! Story Development: 4/5 I enjoyed following the Twins using their brains to outplay and outsmart some of the oldest cultivators. The plot twist that was around 30% of the novel's current length was rather interesting, it was original. The system helps but during some dangerous situations it's not that useful which is something I like. Romance, let's talk about this 'thing' that forced me to dock of point. I'm not hating on people who enjoy romance but I just didn't see Roan falling in love you know? I can see Rean falling in love, but also not. I would've rather liked to see just an action fantasy novel and also because you don't even get to see the girls 75% of the time ._. Character Design: 4/5. I have to give a round of applause to Suiyan for the creation of 'SISTER ORB'! I fucking love her (my opinion), I fell in love with her in the earlier chapters, she was so funny. Roan and Rean are also my favorite duo as well. Not sure if it was intentional but the black and white colors like Yin and Yang, but those 2 sure balance each other out xD. I had to also dock of a star because of Roan and Rean's girls!!!! Half from those 2 and another half from thief lady who's also the mother of that clingy girl (I despise those 2). Hopefully they never appear in the book again >:(. World Background: 5/5. Phew, we're finally at the good part. Some people think that destroying their birth planet was a bad idea but I think it was a good idea. It adds more detail to the plot since how else would Suiyan add the 'Foundation Orbs' (or was it crystals?). The first planet built on a little bit of the backstory of the system, the second planet just added more to that. We also got to see the appearance of a demon and the Realm of Gods. What I like about the current arc was the power near the center and the added effect that reincarnation brings. Sorry if I'm a bit biased, but I couldn't put some of things I wanted to say in words so this will have to do. Suiyan I hope you get better soon :).

Mediocre is the only thing I can say about this book, but I'll got deeper to not start fights. Keep in my mind I only got to about 30 chapters before I had to drop this due to that fact that I couldn't handle the grammatical errors. Writing Quality: 2/5. Only reason why it isn't lower is because I've seen worse. The errors in the sentences ruin my reading experience and I really can't focus. Author. I know that maybe English is your 2nd language but i you just take your time to edit your past errors, it will improve and attract newer readers. P.S: Grammarly is F R E E btw. Stability of Updates: 5/5. The only good thing about this book I guess, at least 1 chapter a day I think. Story Development: 2/5. Take this with a grain of salt since I have no idea how good the later chapters are. Let's talking about the prologue, haha...it's horrible. Plot seems forced, not very well thought out. I get that the Father wanted to to 'humiliate' and 'control' the families by marrying them to Alex, but there are like 5 other fucking sons. Also, using the same words when you can just make it easier for yourself by specifying it. An example would be when the women were going to sacrifice some of their lifespan. There is no need to repeat this, just say how much and you're done. Plot could've been better honestly, there might be more plot holes but I'm not going any further. Character Design: 2/5. We got the whiny woman, yandere woman, etc. Names give identity, the names you give your characters aren't even original, especially for the gods. The mc is unoriginal, even chinese novels do better LMAO. World Background: 2/5. I didn't go that far but when you're creating independent kingdoms, why talk about how the peace was broken once yadada died just to instantly be controlled again. Opinion: I think you should work on your grammar, think about what you're going to write, and use your imagination. I have no idea why this has such a high rating but I guess its because webnovel users are completely braindead.

Author Shameless 5 star review. I've seen a lot of mmorpg novels and I don't even understand how they got to the top. So I decided why not write my own and make it better. I hope you guys follow me on this long journey of a novel.

Reading the first few chapters I was intrigued with the story, it had potential. However the grammar and writing are confusing, this is harsh but I can barely understand the story.

So far the book has been good, the writing is amazing but I hope the updates are faster. The characters are so have their fluffy moments, I'm really looking forward for more.