I have to drop it here. You committed the cardinal sin of erasing the memories of the person who was isekaied What's the point after that? He isn't the same person who died so its not really an isekai at all anymore. Furthermore I can't see Bruce accepting the symbiote unless he was desperate, and certainly not giving up control of his body.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Assessing my situation
Movies · Kenji_Makoto
You Need to show that who is speaking changed somehow.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Batman...begins?
Movies · Kenji_Makoto
Haha, no, thats a writing skip.
ch 0 2 Let's See What We Have Here
Anime & Comics · BlitzKrieG_K
Way, wag too much telling, and not enough showing. For instance you said the z fighters introduced themselves, vs actually writing the introductions. The difference between telling vs showing is like a Summary vs a scene. You need to write the scene, not a Summary of what happened during the scene.
ch 0 1 1. Awakening
Anime & Comics · Gabe_
Terrible, all telling, and no showing.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: New World
Anime & Comics · komega
Bad translation. Also why does Dumbledore call himself a wizard to a muggle?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Wool's Orphanage
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Kind of a let down after last chapter.
ch 191 Chapter LIV: Blasphemy
Video Games · Rastislav
Ehh I saw it coming a long time ago, far too cliche. I know you did it justbto don't it, but Morrigan would have been more expected.
ch 190 Chapter LIII: Royal Rumble
Video Games · Rastislav
The fact he even mentions his race is concerning.
ch 0 1 The One Bearing 'All the Evils of the World'
Anime & Comics · U22
Robot translation.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Anime & Comics · Uchiha_shisui
Luna, idc, if he is in her brother body lol. She best girl.
ch 0 1 Waking up
Book&Literature · Bter
One the best works ever posted here in web nove. Keep it up!
ch 182 Chapter XLV: Of Divine Staves and Elven Goons
Video Games · Rastislav
Too many weird issues. For instance Martha SMELLED the crash. How can you smell a crash?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Second Spaceship Descends on Kent Farm (Edited)
Anime & Comics · INIT
you cant even get the names correct, its Lucifuge, Not Luci-fudge. beyond that, the intro was so boring. Why are you telling us, instead of showing us? the very first chapter and its a bad, poorly written infodump...
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Anime & Comics · CrystalWisp
a little too "out there" for a harry potter fanfic.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 First night
Book&Literature · _Arthas_
Way way too extra. Far too much telling and not enough showing.
ch 0 4 Training Skippu Chp 4
The Ultimate Saiyan Warrior Reborn
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24