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This book has potential to be a classic like the Authors POV. I like the flow and the pace, my only complaint is that the characters that are introduced are not fleshed out more. I really enjoyed everything I’ve read so far and am looking forward to more chapters

I am pleasantly surprised that the reviews lived up to the hype. Everything so far is great and I want to read more chapters. Pat yourself on the back author

If you want something because you are bored and have nothing to read go for it. I wish there was something special about this novel to make it unique but it’s not. The arcs are unoriginal, the character templates as well and honestly that’s fine. The problem is that nothing is really fleshed out and the story feels like it’s going nowhere. I still don’t even understand the world he’s in and how the power systems work.

The dialogue needs some serious work to me the writing feels all over the place. Not to mention the MC who acts like a 13 year old with serious ADHD it’s really hard to keep reading. The story has potential and I hope you continue to improve

I really like this novel and hope for consistent updates. The writing is very good and I like the flow of the story. What stands out most to me is how well the characters are fleshed out and have non cookie cutter personalities. I saved this book and will be looking forward for the next chapters

This story is well made. Once you get past the prologue the flow of the story is very smooth. You should read this

I am so glad you stopped having the pov changes like that. The pacing seems to be just right a little slow at times but it is a good novel. If you could do two chapters a day that would be massive.

This is good. I really like the mc. While it’s kind of a generic premise the execution is original and done very well. Read it and you’ll probably enjoy

Why is it $15 to read 20 chapters. That’s literally criminal

I honestly was off put at first by some bad reviews but I decided to overlook them. I was glad I did this is a good novel and I enjoyed reading it. I only wish there were more chapters like if the author could write two chapters a day I’d literally cry. One last thing, some points the bad reviews had was why doesn’t he show his potential and tell everyone he got the treasure is pretty obvious, it would put a massive target on his back and it is shown that people are looking for him anyways. So good on him for hiding his potential but still being very talented outwardly with his ranking. Read this and I’m sure you’d enjoy it.

I liked the unique world building and characters. The power system is unique and original. Go and read it 5/5

It started off really annoying but when I got to the acedemy arc it got really good. I got up to chapter 92 and I really liked it so far. It was well worth the coins and the character progression for the mc is worth the wait. Would recommend read this novel.