Webnovel Author: JinVonRey - Novel Collection

Update Review after 200 chapters.I like the story so far and the pacing is nice. I would say it's more of an action story than a romance one, but no one mind a dragon going mental after some dared approaching one of women. I'm talking about you Chuzuke, you won't get away from the dragon's jaw!

I like how we got more mommies than harem members (I read up to chapter 15), and I like that. I hope to see more of the dragon side as they are set up to be an important thing. And I like dragons a lot.

The story was good until the author decided to give up on it, I just hope nothing bad happened to him. Such good potential and I hope it won't be wasted.

The story is unique, and the plot is progressing nicely. As each event leads to the next one! The MC isn't dumb nor dense, he also knows how to handle his harem well. The world Background seems to have a lot of mysteries around it with each new thing we meet, more about the world gets revealed. Character designs are amazing in my opinion and I hope to one day get to see arts of them, especially Selena. The story seems simple but with each event, it becomes more complex to deal with and I want to know what will happen after the big event that was mentioned from the start (I'm trying my best to avoid spoilers) The stability of updates is amazing with at least 1 chapter a day and the author said he is going to make it 2 chapters a day and that is just commendable for his first work! Writing quality is where he fell a bit short, as grammar needs some work but it wasn't enough to bother me. I will definitely like to see this story rise,

Thanks, I won't drop it!

Thanks, I will surely take note of that. I will double check the chapters as well make the system a little bit simpler Honestly I made the system like that as I feared it making the Mc op before he reached a certain milestone. Thanks.