Glad to know, thank you for the review!
I found this pretty enjoyable. Please give me more chapters!
ch 0 5 CHAPTER-4
Fantasy · prettygirl_93
I'm not sure if mam is also correct tho
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Fantasy · prettygirl_93
Btw the correct word is "Ma'am"
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Fantasy · prettygirl_93
at this rate she will end like this:
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Fantasy · prettygirl_93
Ahhh, thank you for the answer (:
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Fantasy · prettygirl_93
What is a tiffin?
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Fantasy · prettygirl_93
"You want a piece of my vitality? I want yours, too, fuckers!" Alex let out a demented laugh as he pounced at the dogs, slashing away at their skin that was covered in mana consisting of the element of darkness. "The feeling of hunger is mutual, idiots! Greed, is that the only emotion you have?"
Fantasy · AceAmbrosia
The bells rang endlessly as if there was no tomorrow. The shadows lunged from rooftop to rooftop, moving at speeds humans couldn't even comprehend for a substantial amount of time. Their energy reserves were nigh-infinite, which is why they were regarded as the best assassins of Telos Dou Dromou.
Fantasy · AceAmbrosia
I think this story can be something great, however, there is a big problem in this tale. The author puts too many unnecessary descriptions and info dumps. (Ex: Chapter 1) we don't need to know all of that right at the start. Also, the writing style isn't very appealing to me (maybe because it shows the emotions and motives of everyone, which seems great in theory but isn't at all. There is no mystery.) That being said, the story seems to be progressing rather well and I'm sure that with time, the 'problems' I pointed out in this review will change. Please continue with the great work, author!!
Conqueror of Magic
Fantasy · AMonarch