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Luzero
male LV 4Normal ass boy with maybe a love a little too big for anime and manga. PS. I am also writing a fanfic so come and read it.
2021-02-04 Joined GermanyBadges 4
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Thanks for the Chapter, just found the book and it is really goodIt is so sweet that i think that I get diabetes, and that is a good thing.Rest well author if you are tired and i will be waiting for the next chapter.
ch 22 Chapter 22: Capture, Raise & Keep! (+Notes)
Wait, You Aren’t Cold?
Realistic · Seseal
I would say there are more people who dont these things then people who do this things.
"Isn't all of that normal?" asked Kaito confused.
Reborn in My Hero Academia as a Demon Slayer.
Anime & Comics · ZackDKaizo
A really good Show. Can recommend it!
"Anyway come sit here, there's this awesome new TV show called Castle!" Has this woman forgotten why I came here?
Modern Family: A Star
TV · AceOfHearts18
I dont plan him to be super OP just a talanted Jedi, I thought maybe close to master level when order 66 will happen.And maybe he will not even surive order 66 and my Story will End with that :P.
ch 13 I need your help and ideas (New FF)
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
I uploaded it.
I have blond hair, big orange eyes, small nose, heart shaped face, all in all I look like these idols from my past life. (Sorry I am really bad at describing looks, look at the picture which I will post in the comments, there you can see how he will look like when he is 14-16 just with full orange eyes and blond hair.) I have on a black jacket, black t-shirt, black pants and black shoes. Yes, I love the colour black.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
just with full orange eyes.
I have blond hair, big orange eyes, small nose, heart shaped face, all in all I look like these idols from my past life. (Sorry I am really bad at describing looks, look at the picture which I will post in the comments, there you can see how he will look like when he is 14-16 just with full orange eyes and blond hair.) I have on a black jacket, black t-shirt, black pants and black shoes. Yes, I love the colour black.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
dont really know, i only looked up different face shapes on the internet and i liked this shape the most.
I have blond hair, big orange eyes, small nose, heart shaped face, all in all I look like these idols from my past life. (Sorry I am really bad at describing looks, look at the picture which I will post in the comments, there you can see how he will look like when he is 14-16 just with full orange eyes and blond hair.) I have on a black jacket, black t-shirt, black pants and black shoes. Yes, I love the colour black.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
first of all thanks for your honest feedback and for such a long feedback with many points what i can do better. I always wanted someone who writes such a feedback for me since only with that I can get really better im writing. I will also write a reply about the things you mentioned but it will be done later since I only woke up right know and I am still pretty sleppy. :D
Now I want to talk about my fanfiction, I am pretty satisfied with it till now since it my first time writing something and english is also just my second language. But I would like your honest feedback, what could I have done better till now and what is good, since I can only get better with your feedbacks!
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
sry i will Post it again. I dont know why this keeps happening, i already posted the picture like 3 times and it always deletes itself :P
I have blond hair, big orange eyes, small nose, heart shaped face, all in all I look like these idols from my past life. (Sorry I am really bad at describing looks, look at the picture which I will post in the comments, there you can see how he will look like when he is 14-16 just with full orange eyes and blond hair.) I have on a black jacket, black t-shirt, black pants and black shoes. Yes, I love the colour black.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
I see your point, I didnt know it was made by danzo and that it was exclusive for danzo so my bad.
One B-Rank jutsu is the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere Technique, which is a offensive technique. To perform this jutsu the user takes a deep breath and exhales several small blasts of wind chakra thar scatters in different directions to make it difficult to avoid without injuries. It is capable to pierce through the opponent's flesh. This jutsu was used by Danzo in his fight against Sasuke.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
Yeah u can use that as a reference too, what is more comfortable for you.
When I draw the sword out of it, I can see that the blade is straight and is double edged. It is blue and has gold ornaments in the middle of it. (Picture here)
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
like i said, i think Sasuke didnt sense anything and kakashi and Guy is another thing since they are already ninja. But if u think something different then ut is okay. And Itachi was a genius so, thats also different.
As we leave our house, we see a huge red fox with nine tails. (The kyuubi! So today is the day of the kyuubi attack and the day Naruto is born. Sadly, uncle Minato and aunt Kushina is going to die today.) I think the moment I see the red fox.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
they only know about Naruto, that he is the "Kyuubi" they dont know his parents nor his surname, because that doesnt interest them. If u are so unsatified with my FF then just dont read it. :)
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: First time meeting the main cast
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
Where did he sense it? He just cried because things around got destroyed because of the Kyuubi.
As we leave our house, we see a huge red fox with nine tails. (The kyuubi! So today is the day of the kyuubi attack and the day Naruto is born. Sadly, uncle Minato and aunt Kushina is going to die today.) I think the moment I see the red fox.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
and why do you think Hiruzen would do anything against Danzo? i mean you could see it in the anime how much he allowed him. And Hiruzen doesnt know that he his the nephew from Minato soooo.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Reincarnated in Naruto
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
No? I mean i never wrote anything like that and he isnt a sensor with the age of 3 that he could sence the Kyuubi.
As we leave our house, we see a huge red fox with nine tails. (The kyuubi! So today is the day of the kyuubi attack and the day Naruto is born. Sadly, uncle Minato and aunt Kushina is going to die today.) I think the moment I see the red fox.
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
First of all thanks for the critic. Now i want to explain what my view is of this and maybe you can understand it. No one knows, that he was related to the Minato, since they wanted to hide it, because the Namikaze name has a lot of enemies. I also think that i wrote in a chapter (could be that I am wrong and it was just and idea, which i still need to write) that his dad that wasnt really famous and not many know of him. This is also why they changed they name, to have no enemies hunting the MC especially when Minato died. Why didnt they adopt naruto? Well, his Mother didnt know that Naruto even survived, since the Hokage said nothing to the village that Naruto was Minatos son, so how should the Mother know about Naruto when she is just a normal villager. And of course the Mc cant just say: hey mom this kid is the son of Minato and Kushina, since he also cant know it. They (the Mother) will find out about in the future but not know. So i personally think that it does make sense but maybe i am just biased since it is my story.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: First time meeting the main cast
Reincarnated in Naruto without cheats
Anime & Comics · Luzero
Good one.
It was Honeypuu.
Football/Soccer: I am the best
Others · burakku