Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.
ch 366 Threats?
Fantasy · xlntz
Please explain to me
yes yes... a paragraph above he says that and here the mc starts to change his mind, it's so biased... And are they physical which offers great resistance to the negative effect have we forgotten? just because its arrgance to the author at that time? for me it's just badly done, I would have understood, if it started a long time ago, but the same chapter talks about the negative effects (what are physical and the spell that Master Heinz has specially created to fight against it) but we forgot everything...
ch 361 Isolate
Fantasy · xlntz
"He was at least learning a lot in the Academy, so his resolve to disappear after he got back his Shadow was starting to weaken." Author you're not going to do if not? you keep telling yourself that you wanted to leave the academy, and then you just throw it away? honestly if you do it, I'll stop your novel straight away. I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty... "I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty..." I want to believe that These students are not very strong, but the last 3? we are talking about one of the most powerful academia... I don't know what the author is doing... not ranking it in the top 3 okay, but being ranked as one of the worst? I don't understand anything anymore, I don't know if the author wants to transform it into one of the weakest acadia, but it makes no sense, just none. This chapter sucks, I'm going to take a pose, it disgusts me... see you in a year maybe...
ch 340 Fundamentals
Fantasy · xlntz
"He was at least learning a lot in the Academy, so his resolve to disappear after he got back his Shadow was starting to weaken." Author you're not going to do if not? you keep telling yourself that you wanted to leave the academy, and then you just throw it away? honestly if you do it, I'll stop your novel straight away. I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty...
ch 361 Isolate
Fantasy · xlntz
he decided not to return to the room anymore, or to put it another way, if he did, no one would be, suddenly there would be no problem related to his, but the author in his great generosity decided to make sure that the mc faces it from the outside, so that it can create useless problems, to be able to create a related plot, a plot that could easily have been avoided, a stupid plot, certainly, a plot that is not very thoughtful, an intrigue... but here it is, the author has chosen the path to facilitate it...
ch 316 Lightning
Fantasy · xlntz
in fact, on some really interesting thing why not, but the MC stole 100% of everything the protagonist had, everything, even the girls, shit, there are so many women in this world, but just decide to steal these girls... if as if the mc targeted him directly, whereas with the mc's system, he could have had a lot of things, without stealing them from the latter, but no, he just followed the usual cliché , steal all the opportunities that the protagonist might have, even if the latter is of no use to him. and what annoys me the most is in relation to the girls, it's like png, if you respond in the same way as the protagonist, you obstruct their love, it's so ridiculous. In short, I didn't like it.
BTTH Life Simulator System
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