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VasL
male LV 1Amateur writer looking for feedback on my works.
2021-02-05 Joined GlobalBadges 5
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I appreciate it!
ch 21 Conference (II)
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL
Hahaha! It's alright! I often spell words like that wrong.
I'm way better now!
Glad you like it!
Thanks for all the feedback
Yes I realized that and fixed it later on
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Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL
Thanks
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Reborn as a Necromancer
Fantasy · VasL
sorry I've been super busy
ch 17 Preparation (I)
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL
He shuts them down
"Please party with us!" (In unison)
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL
You don't like it?
"Please party with us!" (In unison)
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL
Thanks
what
I like it so far, but each line of dialog should have its own line. Concept Dialouge Continuation
ch 0 1 Chapter one - "Where the Hell am I?"
I lead the Army of Darkness -Isekai story
Fantasy · A_Generic_Writer
Isekai'd**
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I lead the Army of Darkness -Isekai story
Fantasy · A_Generic_Writer
I just finished writing it. Did you read it that fast?
Try out my other novel. Mage vs. Modern Society
ch 0 9 Interview and Medieval (I)
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL