Webnovel Author: agnozan - Novel Collection

thank you for the review, i have in mind to increase more screentime of the female lead, but that would have to wait. I'll be sure to maintain the quality of my writing

thank you for the review, I'll try to stay consistent with the quality of my writing and hopefully be able to meet everyone's expectations

Writing Quality is a 4-star because although there's a wide use of jargons and gaming slang terms, there are a few typos here and there, and the sentence flow sometimes felt a bit awkward; I tend to drown during writing so I sometimes missed those silly mistakes. Even for Chapter 1 I spent 1 whole day trying to proofread it myself, which took a lot of time from me writing. Stability of Updates is a 3-star because so far, I only have two major story arcs planned which would amount to 50+ chapters. I'll however, am confident to deliver at least 1 chapter a week, as there's another title I'm working on as well. Story Development is a 5-star because so far, there is a logical sequence of events take happened one after another, and I try to reduce using plot armor as much as I could consciously, and even if there is a plot armor, I try to make it not OP and can be countered. Character Design is a 4-star, I based the MC of a 30-years old man with no career IRL. Thus, he had a very .old-man vibes to him, but his personality was very immature because he spent his leisure time playing video games with people 5-10 years younger than him - a typical man-child. I am already planning to introduce another key character in the coming chapters. World Background is a 5-star because I actually based the story setting from a recurrent nightmare I had when I was a child. It was so traumatic that I remember vividly the details of that world. I really want to describe the world that I saw in my dream. P.S. I am the author of Cal.Prognos and I personally have a few opinions on this work of mine.