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Nuel had gone to sleep the night before after finishing playing the game 'ex Umbrae Online', an MMOFPSRPG that had been running for 6 years. However, he soon woke up to the sound of emergency siren, to which he found himself inside a cryostasis pod.
"Wait, isn't this the quest we did last night? The daily quest where we save and escort back some civilians? And now I'm that civilian???"
Join Nuel as he got transmigrated into the game and experience how it's like living in the 23rd century where the light of human civilisation had almost been devoured entirely by the shadows. Revel in how he survived against enemies of humanity in a world plunged into the darkness.
P.S. Updates once/twice a month since I have a day job.
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Among the best realistic scifi ive ever read, how the story moves, the filler (fluff-potential) chapters with the female lead, the scientific and technological details, the world itself, wow just amazing...really recommended thank you author for bringing this piece of literature to life.
I personally enjoy the plot development and the characters (the second FL needs more screentime, please)...and what suprised me was the factual details the author included, for example, bullets calibre, military base facilities, science behind a abilities, etc... Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️
First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best. Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
I know it's the limit of writing, but the author should try to use less of the character status screen written into the plot. I think it's quite disruptive to the reading experience. My idea is that put another section at the bottom of the chapter after story is written. And if need to mention it in the story, just write the important information. Good luck to you, mr. author, i really enjoyed the premise and the plot so far... [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story-telling, amazing scifi plot, really recommended for readers who enjoy the genre. the author also was really dedicated to uploading frequently and constantly, thumbs-up from me...
Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you
Wow i'm actually amazed by the storytelling technique the writer used in chapter 9, two povs on the same scene, one from the a soldier, the other from a gamer...nice touch, and a job well done
The writer seemed to have put a lot of thought in worldbuilding, as well as how to implement them into the writing. there are many small details that explained the world while the story is moving on, without over-saturating the plot with narration, which in my personal opinion is the correct way to explain the world...though i'll admit that the writing is not perfect, it still able to draw in the readers' attention to the plot
There's a bit too much brackets that it felt hard to read in thge bginning, but now I'm 7 chapters in, it had kind of grown on me...the main lead character was a bit too hyper i think, he thinks to himself too much...but i guess it must be the character design by the writer.
I quite enjoy the story so far, especially with the way the system is portrayed - it's not OP but it does work aas a plot armor, i mean read chapter 4 you get it...but the rest is good...i enjoy comparing the before and after stats change, it feels like the mc is growing...and the military radio call was done very good...does the author actually do radio calls? why is there no mech? i know there's like a power suit, but no mech yet? please include it would be interesting to see a mech fight...
Writing Quality is a 4-star because although there's a wide use of jargons and gaming slang terms, there are a few typos here and there, and the sentence flow sometimes felt a bit awkward; I tend to drown during writing so I sometimes missed those silly mistakes. Even for Chapter 1 I spent 1 whole day trying to proofread it myself, which took a lot of time from me writing. Stability of Updates is a 3-star because so far, I only have two major story arcs planned which would amount to 50+ chapters. I'll however, am confident to deliver at least 1 chapter a week, as there's another title I'm working on as well. Story Development is a 5-star because so far, there is a logical sequence of events take happened one after another, and I try to reduce using plot armor as much as I could consciously, and even if there is a plot armor, I try to make it not OP and can be countered. Character Design is a 4-star, I based the MC of a 30-years old man with no career IRL. Thus, he had a very .old-man vibes to him, but his personality was very immature because he spent his leisure time playing video games with people 5-10 years younger than him - a typical man-child. I am already planning to introduce another key character in the coming chapters. World Background is a 5-star because I actually based the story setting from a recurrent nightmare I had when I was a child. It was so traumatic that I remember vividly the details of that world. I really want to describe the world that I saw in my dream. P.S. I am the author of Cal.Prognos and I personally have a few opinions on this work of mine.
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