My pfp is from the manhwa “The Second Coming of Gluttony” I recommend it if you like fantasy and rpg genres.
2021-02-23 Joined United States
I missplaced this comment. Ment to write it under my review but I guess this works too lol.
ch 0 1 Chapter 2.2: The Happiest Girl
LGBT+ · yours_truly7
I’m sorry if any of this review felt harsh but I wanted to give an honest opinion. I don’t mean anything bad, your writing skills are already really good but I believe that you have room to grow as an Author. Hope you don’t take any of this the wrong way!
ch 0 1 Chapter 2.2: The Happiest Girl
LGBT+ · yours_truly7
After reading through all the current chapters in the better half of 2 days, I gotta say, for a self-proclaimed inexperienced writer, you certainly are a talented one. Being able to write that much in such a short amount of time isn’t something I could even dream of being able to do. Thats not even getting to the quality of your writing, your knowledge and use of words in this novel is certainly of the best I have seen on Webnovel. On top of that, the creativity and complexity with the characters and the plot along with the magic system has me intrigued on what is to come in later stages of this novel! This is 100% one of the best works on Webnovel that I have seen, which is around 200 novels! You can certainly expect a 5-star review from me and a few powerstones along the way.
ch 27 A purpose for magic
Fantasy · AngelAsphodel
No more needs to be said.
At first, he intended to give his opponent a good punch, but who knew that his punch landed on soft cotton instead.
Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
Every person who read this:
I wonder how many stats will I have if I eat the guild master's arm? Well, that's crazy and I'm sounding like a hungry monster which contradicts my handsome appearance.
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
I re did all of the maumar chapters, yes hes still battle crazy because it is said before he goes into maumar, but no it isnt 10 years anymore I bumped it up to 14 years, and also no one of the main reason for me re doing vol 2 was because of the complicated time stuff.
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: New Student
Fantasy · JuniorJumble
By rewriting i mean literally deleting the current story in volume 2 and re doing it.
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
The boy looked rather slow and dumb.
Eastern · Three Feet Divine Sword
Sorry if the way I explain things makes it sound complex.
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
One would still grow the same speed if they were on either Maumar or Earth though. If you spend three years on maumar its equal to 6 years on your body and mind.
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
2s on Earth = 1s on Maumar
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
ty
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
Supposed to be 16980 my bad i wrote this when i was tired.
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Fantasy · JuniorJumble
Lol
“Where did you run away to? Why does your hair and beard look messy why didn’t you save? Do you know how worried we were when we couldn’t find you? Couldn’t you have told us about where you were going to?” shouted Yi Man-young.
Urban · Rish_madara
A kitchen isnt the same as a dining room
As Adam doesn't plan to live in this place anyway, and just practice most of the time, he created the area that only has 3 rooms on it. The first room is the kitchen, which is simple and only of 8 m³ volume.
Fantasy · Khier
Does he always have a backpack on him?
While staring at the incoming horde of monsters, Link took out something from his backpack space without any hesitation—it was a crystal clear crystal ball!
Urban · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
Sure, my discord is @14o41
Error Within the System
Fantasy · JuniorJumble