Badges 8
Moments 38
Looks like someone can't take criticism at all, ready to bite back when someone does not agree with you. And yeah, I use fastpass to unlock chapters and don't contribute anything to you but I will still say my piece.
ch 367 Three Legions!
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
You are not alone when you call someone your friend, I read this chapter a bit bit late but this was a huge letdown after what happened in the north camp, this chapter shar over everything.
However, what choice did he have? At the moment he was basically alone, surrounded by strangers whom he had just met a little less than two months ago. He needed people to confide in.... No, more accurately: Bai Zemin needed people he didn't need to worry about a possible betrayal.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Man, have you dropped this novel??
ch 49 Let The Hunt Begin!
The Way of a Demon Lord
Fantasy 路 TheDarkSide
At least stay True to your Words Man!!
ch 54 Emperor (I)
Life of a Villain
Eastern 路 REaper
Dude!! Are you gonna update or not???
ch 54 Emperor (I)
Life of a Villain
Eastern 路 REaper
dude, why are the updates so irregular?
ch 53 Murals
Life of a Villain
Eastern 路 REaper
Man! As far as I have read this seems really boring to me. The only reason I keep going is because the premise is interesting and the MC honestly feels like a loser, hope this changes soon.
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The Novel's dead
Fantasy 路 Mythwalker
dude your story is awesome and I love it!! one request though- please announce if you are going premium bcz I like to stockpile and it would hurt if I had to open chapters that I could read before.
ch 78 Chapter 78- The New Elder In Charge
The Unwanted
Fantasy 路 Sivios
I think the worm was literally blown to dust with nothing remaining.
ch 102 Fantasy world
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Could you reply a bit?? I have seen novels involving power struggle going down this road quite a bit. Just want to know if you have something in mind for that??
ch 224 A King & A Dynasty
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Maybe 'One Shot Man'馃槣馃槣
[You have received the title 'One Hit to Kill'].
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Well I have to say one thing, the conversations are kind of bland like they knew this was going to happen or something and the relationships feels kind of forced, you should work more on how to bring emotions out. You know there are many expressions like his brows wrinkled or a glint pass his eyes and whatnot if used correctly they add a certain charm, so probably go for that( maybe馃し). and lastly I will suggest to read some more novels of the same genre to learn how to express yourself better. Good luck with your writing馃憤馃憤.
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The Ultimate Birthright
Fantasy 路 godisdisappointed
She said she could kill a first order beast but not easily like bai zemin did with the shadow tiger. Perhaps more in line with the fight Mc had with the beetle, by giving her all and defeating it.
ch 90 The true terror of the mutated forest (Part 2-Last)
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Man your story-telling and the way the novel is progressing is very fresh and unique it's almost like reading a manga and I thoroughly enjoy your novel. So, I wish you best of luck with your novel and please carry on the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend] .
ch 90 BONUS CHAP- Info Dump-6(ii) (Ages)
The Tale of the Devil Sword Master
Eastern 路 Crazy_Cronie_1
Don't know how the story will turn out but reading the first chapter, I was really impressed and this looks like a fresh story. The grammer was good and when he broke down crying, that hit a chord. Great start Author!! Hope you continue this in upcoming chapters as well and turn this into something genuine and interesting. Good luck writing[img=recommend][img=recommend].
ch 0 1 One - Telephone Booth
DELETED and DISCARDED
Fantasy 路 AfterDarkWriting
To be honest, it seems a little extreme. Well Parents at most can abandon their child but no one will gut them without feeling any remorse, especially the mother.
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Omnipotent Destroyer
Fantasy 路 Elixer_Yuu
If you don't care, you shouldn't be triggered but it seems to me you have hot red chilly up your you know where, ready to burn others, everytime you have the chance.
ch 367 Three Legions!
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN