Webnovel Author: Bobsta - Novel Collection

I love that someone actually made a story on webnovel about MTG, but you must not have played for that long as all of the cards you mentioned were recently printed, and weren't actually competitive. The games and how they played out were realistic and I can relate a lot, but no hardcore magic player tells the opponent ANYTHING about their deck until the end of the round. Even if the kid's have beaten adults, trust me, realistically, they'd be blabbing and making misplays, like putting a card onto the battle field, starting to say they cast it, then putting it back in their hand and saying it was a not spell caused reveal. I do love the book though and I got all of the references.

Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves", and, "The people that god spurned".

That's kind of funny when you have a review like that, if you can't use good grammar, spelling, and punctuation, what right do you have to criticize someone for the same thing? This is a heavily edited version of your review that conforms to the rules of the english language. "I rated the writing quality 2 stars since I can't really understand since the author has first person pov written inside parenthesis while third person point of view is written inside hyphens. The commas, periods, capital letters and exclamation point were not put in the right place. When all of it's added together...that's what makes it difficult for me to read. (I have high standards for writing quality but since the story is nice, I'll let it slip). But the story is nice alongside the characters."

It's back, and you're an IMPOSTER...!

This is my first story but I've been reading books and novels from when I was 6 so I sincerely hope that I have enough experience to know what a not terrible novel is. If there are grammar or spelling mistakes fell free to point them out and I will fix them; also if there are plot holes I will revise a couple chapters to make it fit, and if it's major I will rewrite that part entirely. Thank you and please be respectful.

Probably before it was being rewritten.