Another good chapter. Have a stone!
ch 0 6 Chapter 5
Sci-fi · Pauiiverrie
Good job writing something so creepy & atmospheric
ch 0 3 One Night.
Horror · not_sou_serious
I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far. The premise is intriguing. I'm generally not a fan of large info dumps in the first chapter (i.e. most of Zeta's backstory could have been revealed over the course of her dialogue with Anlo). Then again, that's just my personal philosophy. Otherwise, good job
ch 0 1 Nokotoans
Sci-fi · cnetta803
Love this so far! Interesting and darkly humorous concept
ch 0 1 Prologue - Hello World
Horror · Geminel
I like the story so far; it's morbid, surreal, but also very creative. Keep it up!
ch 0 1 New Dawn Fades
Fantasy · Dunwich
I like the premise so far. Will definitely check the rest out!
ch 0 1 world building (Must read)
Sci-fi · 1996611q
I am very impressed by the story so far. There is a lot of action, with some very well-written space battles (Those can be tricky). The writing style is fluid and very casual. I like the jump into action with no info-dumping. I would, however, like to see the world explored more in detail in the coming chapters! Good job!
Starship System Iconoclast
Sci-fi · Haizao