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IamBoredGuy
male LV 4I am so bored.
2021-02-27 Joined GlobalBadges 7
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Do you mean mainly lewds instead of plot? Then no. I think your current strength is the tasteful and comedic prose, not lewds, though I think that one Cyberpunk chapter where you Co-Authored with your wife was quite good.
To the topic at hand. Should I focus more of my writing on Lewds? Obviously not in this specific story due to the rampant nonconsensual nature of most of Jorah's relationships, but in general?
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM
What would happen if he plants sharingan in his eyeholes? Hahaha.
"Besides, Jiryoku is not a threat to our clan as long as we don't give him any reason to be. We just need to keep a watchful eye on him and make sure he doesn't cause any trouble," added Hiashi.
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
Bodyguard? Come on man, if he starts taking companions to missions I'll be so disappointed. I thought it was supposed to be used as a trainer or something, cause there's no way that superhero kid wouldn't have created someone strong from his past missions.
In any case, I decided to hold off creating myself a bodyguard, because it simply wasn't worth it. If I didn't have any Points, then I would have, as even a boxer was better than I was, even if only stat-wise.
Terror Infinity: Monster
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
Why? How did he break his mental limit? By holding back doing something stupid? Come on man, I would've accepted it if he was under torture or something. The story is interesting but the MC and the obvious plot armor is making me reconsider.
[Mental Limit broken! Rewarded 500 Points, Intelligence increased by 20 points, Mental Capacity increased by 30 points!]
Terror Infinity: Monster
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
Based grandma.
As for Geraldine, she threw me a scornful glance, and stopped looking at me.
Terror Infinity: Monster
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
This is so random lol.
A cruel smile appeared on his face. "Ryomen Sukuna."
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Author wants to stay true to the Source Material. Even that earlier chesire situation was full of bs.
ch 23 Deleting this after a few hours
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Good fanfiction for now. Even I can tell a forced plot when I see one. If it's repeated too much just to cater to YJ's plot then what's the point of writing ff if the author isn't going to change anything? As for writing, not everyone has free time to write garbage like you.
"I hear you had an…altercation with Roy. Do you want to talk about it?" Dinah asked Dante.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Tbh, the chesire situation and this pointless drama is making this fic look mid. What are you doing author seriously.
"I hear you had an…altercation with Roy. Do you want to talk about it?" Dinah asked Dante.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Battle of the bàstards will have a new meaning.
Based purely on the women he currently has access too and the cut off birth date of 284 for participation, Jorah will have 104 trueborn sons participating in whatever version of the War of Five Kings that takes place. The twenty or so Snows he dropped in Wintertown when he and Greatjon when cruising for sluts will fight for the Starks, and he'll also have 62 sons-in-law and a handful of grandchildren fighting for him. Not hundi on what the roughly 120 bastards he sired in Dorne will be doing.
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM
This story became a mess. It had good premise but its too all over the place.
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BATMAN in MCU
Movies · STEVIOL_GLY
Last part made me feel the Stoicism. Stoicism aside, I think you could've delivered the fallout more impactful if you gave Elia a POV. I knew it was coming a mile away when they already had a kid without any meaningful moments(Like a normal couple should), but I am kind of left disappointed at MC's reaction. Maybe it was just the writing but I felt he should've reacted more through his actions like most guys would do after rejection(Grind their pain away). Anyway, good chapter overall, can't wait for the drama! (Assuming your done with the Kingdom Building Arc)
Despite that I think I did alright on this one on all fronts except a timely delivery. I wanted to get the fallout with Elia correct. I needed to show that she mattered, but that Jorah has too much inner strength for romantic disappointment to slow him down. Its a misconception that the level of love in a relationship is directly proportional to the depression after its loss. In fact, I'd say huge displays of self destructive sadness are an indication of lacking character and grit. Dealing with disappointment with grace and dignity is an underappreciated quality these days, and that needs to stop. Bring back grace and dignity.
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM
You use flashbacks too much. Just stick to the present, you're making the story progression needlessly complicated.
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BATMAN in MCU
Movies · STEVIOL_GLY
Rizzler is only thirteen but is already experiencing two timing problems.
ch 86 Chapter 86: Pitiful Daphne
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
A normal man in GoT would be boring and frankly a waste of time. He could only survive if he has OP cheats. He would get eaten alive with his thinking.
If it was the latter and Ulfric was a little natural born simp, I'd ensure when we head south for the Rebellion that he never makes it back to the North. Maybe I can get him on the Tower of Joy team. Ned would see the boy dead for me and I'd get sympathy points with the guy. Two birds one stone. That's the kind of thinking that gets me what I want.
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM
What? But you said he wasn't gonna baby sit them? Are all these fillers then? What's even the point in him being there???
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Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
Huh??? Filler at chapter 4?
"I know Doc and thank you, I look forward to seeing you at the funeral. I will be taking my leave now." Tom stood up and shook hands with the doctor before taking his leave.
VECTOR IN DC
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme
This story would be good if the second priority is romance. Man I am disappointed. Will he leave her crew after he reaches grand line or stay and babysit them? He's too strong for them. They'll get offed by Blackbeard later so it could be used for a revenge plot. Please answer author.
"I would like to join your crew." Carter said, before dropping the 8 pizzas on the table in front of her, "A greeting gift, from me to you." He said while opening the box of the top pizza.
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
-Be me, a popular singer-messaged by a talented kid about colab-Accepts thinking we would do awesome collabs-Talented kid wants me to smuggle him outside gang territory for collab-Wat do I do???
I'm willing to sell you Take Me To Church and write whatever song you want, I just need enough money to leave Brockton Bay... Quickly. Tomorrow night the ABB wants me to do something, and I'm not sure what will happen.
Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
Book&Literature · Niggross