that's messed up ... where is the filial piety :(
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Fantasy · Choka
Self preservation- I respect that.
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Fantasy · Choka
sure thing 👍👍 I'll add it to my library
Man might actually be mistaken as a pedo when he's over 18 :(
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Fantasy · Rin_Nurnia
Nice way to indirectly world build
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Urban · JBShelly
True story actually
Love the review ma boi[img=recommend]
So reading this, I will definitely say it was a fun and engaging read. The plot is straightforward and simple, with the pacing nice and not too fast. The characters themselves are engaging to follow and their interactions are nice. Criticism wise, I guess I could say that maybe the overall grammar and syntax could be better, but that in my opinion is largely superficial and can be rectified. In short great story which I would highly recommend.
The Rift: Masked Phantom
Fantasy · Jims_Rid