The story background is clear, but he thinks it would be better for mc if it is explained why mc is in bad shape or defined by why, what successes he has. More episodes please [img=tavsiye ederim]
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I think the story moves pretty fast. I believe it could be a little slower and sweeter with more details in production and development, or it would be nicer by increasing the lack of emotion in double conversations. Bless your hands. Please more episodes....
Fantasy · Strange Human
Çok güzel ve akıcı bir kurgusu var. Sıkmadan bir nefeste 40 bölüm okudum. Yazara ve aracı siteye teşekkür ediyorum. Devamını bekliyoruz. Gücün yanında yaratıcılığın da ön planda olduğu bir hikaye. Ve karakterler kesinlikle ilgi çekici. Her birinin hikayesini merak ediyorum
Fantasy · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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The story background is clear, but he thinks it would be better for mc if it is explained why mc is in bad shape or defined by why, what successes he has. More episodes please [img=tavsiye ederim]