Elys33

I like it..... but it's just kinda strange having female primarchs

Loving the story I hope it continues

I don't usually comment, but this is a great story, so keep up the great work

I hope the story is still continuing I don't understand some of the hate, but it's a good story in my opinion and if the author sees this, you're doing a great job and hope you continue

take a break if you need it and once again remember the naruto universe is huge, so don't put to much pressure on yourself and enjoy it because I enjoy your story telling

Thanks for your work and efforts, never thought I would have seen the 3rd Hokage being a badass and a true leader unlike what the show, showed us, love your writings style and in a world that has a lot of world building already I love the spin you put into it.There's more I wish I could say, but overall I love the story and feels like I'm reading/watching a spin-off of the original

This chapter was great, it took awhile, but the pacing is picking up and he's finally giving orders like a leader, I don't mind his kindness, but hopefully the battles are in depth, large, deep..... hmmmm it's the middle ages so don't be afraid to be bloody if need be, sending lots of support and really great writing

Your watch has ended, rest brother, for the governor, for the empire