NOVEMBER_TOPAZ - Profile

The story is like a body with no head, arms, and legs. Can't get to wrap up this sickening beginning of it. There should be a sharp description of it for us readers to understand. The only description of the characters is age, names, CEO billionaire,. Definitely more details are needed to get bits and pieces of the story, like Is Mr. Mu this despicable evil man because of revenge? deception? or what ?!

The translation is great, character design is good, backgrounds and update stability is average, but when it comes to quality and development is poor. The story takes from 5- 10 chapters basically to turn page. Each chapter has to much repeated description as the writer is using different words but with the same meaning leading the story to be boring. The storyline has potential but repeated description has to be fixed.

This book is for sure unlike any other story. The best is that the plot is not on a loop. I read other books 📚 from different authors but for sure they all lack of creativity and I observe that those authors are following this marvelous Kenzz, most probably trying to imitate her writing and creativity but they don't even hold up a candle. I'm pretty sure that there are other talented authors but so far Kenzz is one of the best. Thank you for this incredible book.

Disappointed!. At first storyline was consistent, but as time passed it kept on going back and forth as if the author was begging to brainstorm. Let's not forget about the constant "I WILL REPLACE THIS CHAPTER SOON ". The story now is just being dragged out. It truly seems the author just became uninterested in this story and so started a release of a new book. Just my thoughts, but if you just can't keep up with 1 or 2 books at a time what makes you think you can with 3. I followed the author's work thinking that because she had such a great book develop on " The hidden wife " it was going to be the same on the rest but look at me now 🤦🤦🤦