Intriguing opening chapter
ch 0 1 The Interview
Fantasy · AthensAwaitsMe
Why did he go by himself? he could have ordered someone else to go.
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Fantasy · Inemin
There were two babies in the name of Luna?
ch 0 -50 Luna
Fantasy · Inemin
So Nakul spent 40 years to do his task and still trying to?
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Fantasy · Inemin
Intriguing opening chapter
ch 0 -53 Prologue part I
Fantasy · Inemin
Nice poem
I doubted if I should ever come back.*
Fantasy · Inemin
you are totally right
The maid lowered her head and walked out like a wronged child. Selah shook her head and followed the maid. She had no patience to listen to her previous relationship with a scary man. It was obvious the man didn't love the duchess, but she was still throwing herself on him thus ending a miserable end.
History · MIMI24
The writing is good and simple to understand. The story development is a bit slow. The first chapter introduces the ML only. There is no action but the fight with a bully which gets solved easily. Give the lead an ambition and let him suffer to achieve it. It was said that the main character had some sort of great power. It will be nice to have him discover himself through tough experiences and not give him the power easily. Overall it is a fun read.
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It was a fun read. Continue the good work!
ch 0 2 Ethan Smith
Urban · Diamond_sunshine
she was certainly going to be fired.
Avery's jaw dropped as she took in his features. His strong jawline, piercing eyes which were framed by his dark and long lashes, and his full lips had a natural pink hue, adding to his overall attractiveness.
Urban · Diamond_sunshine
Wow! Nice move.
That was the breaking point for Avery. Her blood boiled as anger coursed through her veins, and before she could realize it, she had already picked up a cup of hot coffee, and thrown it at him.
Urban · Diamond_sunshine
sorry for being late to review your novel.
ch 0 2 The Accident
I Wish For the Top of the Tower
Fantasy · AthensAwaitsMe