Moments 9
I love this scene. They way he just picks himself up and leaves. No sign of his name but he seems to be a developing character. Great great so far.
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Eastern · Christie_M
OMG you have me hooked on this mystery guy now. He seems interesting to read more on..
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Eastern · Christie_M
At first I thought it was Dorian but my my an unfamiliar face. Who is the mystery guy....
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Eastern · Christie_M
He is so intriguing. Dorian is my favorite. I like that there is a chemistry between them both
“Look at me.” “It will only make things easier for you.”
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Eastern · Christie_M
Very detailed, I must say. Typical teenagers it shows. I like it. Enjoying the story.
I slowly walked off on the girls and there he stood by himself. For the first time, his eyes caught mines only to make me melt on the spot. As he passed his hands on his falling hair back to his head. I managed to gather up some courage to walk up to him. Seeing that I got his attention alone. Step by step I slowly moved towards his corner, but it was too late. In no time I was pushed away by some of his friends and I bet they were planning to hook up with some of the hot girls at school. The sly grins and excitement made it clear to me that it was nothing more than this. I thought to myself how he was an ass, no different from the others. Except for Nev, he was so simple and true. D loves to play games and his favorite of all was.
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Eastern · Christie_M
The description was amazing. Dorian seems to be a handful
ch 0 2 The Introduction
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Eastern · Christie_M
So much drama and sadness. I want to read more but unfortunately I can't. Please post more free chapters.
ch 0 9 The Brothers
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Eastern · Christie_M