samridhi_bhardwaj

2yr

Commented

Awesome! Loved it thoroughly! The storyline is extremely gripping and made me experience the whole thing through imagination! Everything has been vividly described and your passion for football is evidently portrayed! Amazing work

ch 0 1 Inkford University

A Bond That Was Never Meant To Be, A Love That Was Destined

Fantasy · Kunal_Snehi

samridhi_bhardwaj

3yr

Commented

Oh god, this chap was so disheartening! It's so true that be it a happy phase or a sad one, nothing lasts forever. I was so engrossed in it, I wish they have a happy ending and also I hope Lily gets well soon. Can't wait for the next chapter to know what happens next!

ch 0 3 Lily's Childhood

Find yourself.

Realistic · Kunal_Snehi

samridhi_bhardwaj

3yr

Commented

Wow, I love how you've captured the nuances and emotions of the family members who are not from a well off economic background! I was constantly curious to know what was going to happen next, and will it lead to something positive and happy or something saddening! The suspense in the end wad so unexpected! Can't wait for chap 3, good going.

ch 0 2 Tragic Into Existence

Find yourself.

Realistic · Kunal_Snehi

samridhi_bhardwaj

3yr

Posted

This is not a book, it's an experience in itself! Enjoyed each word of it!! Looking forward to its continuation! Keep it up. During the whole time I was totally engrossed and involved in it. The words hold on to you and make you wonder/ question / interpret and experience a different realm of the world. Awesome !

Find yourself.

Realistic · Kunal_Snehi

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