Moments 4
3yr
Commented I love how you have instilled vulnerabilities on the MC, makes him look and feel as human as possible.
"Why, are you crying?" A soft voice from behind asked. "Nothing, I was just leaving." He woke up to continue his journey to nowhere. It was getting dark and his anxiety levels were high enough to provide a ledge for a suicide attempt. Then it struck him that the old shopkeeper never told him the year or month it was.
Life in Another Life
Sci-fi · Wise_08
3yr
Commented This fast chapter has been structured perfectly, not revealing much and building the MC appropriately. I love this novel.
ch 0 1 The Questions with No Answers
Life in Another Life
Sci-fi · Wise_08
Oh noooo. Just 6 chapters. It has been a long while but I have finally come across a really good and interesting Novel. I love the idea of the MC being built slowly unlike having him show his strengths from the first day. I hope to get more and more and more. Please do as many chapters as you can in a day. [img=faceslap]
Life in Another Life
Sci-fi · Wise_08