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“Where am I.” a significant question in Davis’s mind and lips as he tried to understand what had happened to him.
Davis woke up to find himself in a foreign country in Lizzy’s house thinking that he was just drunk and wasted.
He attempted to look for his friends but finds no one. He realized that he is not in Theo, his home country, and had lost an entire month of his memories.
He tried to find out what happened to him. His attempts failed and he decided to let go of his search for an explanation of what happened to him.
He is forced to fit in the new world. However, he kept on talking about home, a place that no one had ever heard of.
People started saying he is mentally ill and reported him to the police.
Davis evaded the police but was eventually caught and taken to an asylum where his quest for the truth is rejuvenated.
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Really hooked on this story, cant wait for the next updates! The pace of the story is very good and chapters aren't too long so it's smooth read. And David is a very likeable MC, I would also freak out waking up in unfamiliar place.
I have read the first five chapters of this book and to be honest I can't wait for more. The author knows how to build a story. I can't wait for more. I hope you be consistent. Thank you for the good content.
Great start. The book is intruiging right off the bat. I like the order of events and the pace of the story. Waiting for more updates! [img=recommend]
The world has it out for this poor MC. Theres an Aspect of mystery that is really compelling. The worldbuilding seems interesting, and I wonder what future chapters will reveal about the world. The MC is really relatable because of how in over his head he is, although i hope he starts to gain his footing soon.
The novel has a good premise, albeit one that has been seen before: Transported into another world. However, it focuses on psychological aspect of it instead of using it as a plot device to set up a fantasy world. There are issues with execution, mainly in delivery. For example, the beginning paragraph reads,"'Wait, where am I?' Davis asked himself after opening his eyes and looked at the blue ceiling that looks nothing like his favorite poster, which he always wanted to see when he woke up. He had never gotten that drunk. The problem at this point was not where he was but how he got there." It would be better to focus a bit more on setting up the scene and showing Davis's thoughts and confusion. One example could be 'Where am I'. With a groan and a few mumbled curses, Davis managed to right himself up on the mattress. After waking up on an unfamiliar bed and greeted to the sight of a foreign ceiling, He knew he had ****ed up. Not seeing his favorite poster on the ceiling was a good indication that he had crashed somewhere other than his house. But the question of how he had gotten into this mess didn't matter, he would care about that detail latter, preferably when he was less hungover. All he needed to do was find out where he was. Pacing is also a bit of an issue. The novel seems to go a bit fast, but this can be easily corrected. All the author has to do is slow down, add some details, and make use of writing in third person. Adding info and using third person to better explain what is going on and how the characters feel would fix the pacing. Right now, I would say that dialogue makes up the majority of the novel. While not bad in its own right, it can hurt pacing. I would suggest making dialogue a smaller percentage of the novel than what it is currently. That doesn't mean cut it out, but spread it farther apart by fleshing out details. and making use of third person narration. I look forward to what the author can do with this story.
Mysterious for sure.. absolutely loved it.. hopefully you won't drop it and continue to give us entertainment..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The copious amounts of David is high with this one. There are also some minor tensing issues but other than that, this entire story is a banger. The first chapter slaps harder than your mom when you retort during her lecture
The story in this novel is designed creatively to bring characters to life. every chapter displays good content and captivating build-ups. The book is great. watch out for more.
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keeps getting interesting day by day. I love how you made 5 chapters fit on the same day. The story has very good pace. I guess this is the third time I am rating.
this book keeps getting interesting. the author keeps killing me with suspense. Please don't fail to post on a daily basis I yearn for more.
I am enjoying the book myself as I write it. The characters evolve in my mind as I narrate the story. I bet you are enjoying it too and learning from the book.
Oh noooo. Just 6 chapters. It has been a long while but I have finally come across a really good and interesting Novel. I love the idea of the MC being built slowly unlike having him show his strengths from the first day. I hope to get more and more and more. Please do as many chapters as you can in a day. [img=faceslap]
I have no complaints about the book.the author keeps getting better and better with every chapter. great work, great content, great story. I hope that you will write it to the end.
i like it. its really interesting. it makes me to read more and more. it make fire on my curiousity. each chapter is long. i prefer short chapters.