Howdy! I read your story and a bit of your prologue so far. Ive got to say, chiefkiss. your writing style is very fluid and articulate and allows for so much creativity to flow onto the page. Your world is really cool and the concept of your main characters are great and original. I see you upload a lot so please dont stop haha!
Howdy! Ive been reading for a while now and I gotta say i love it so far. and I agree with what you said about our writing styles being similar. The concepts are even kind of close! And that makes me a little biased toward your writing and story as well. I honestly did have a few criticisms but after reading further you addressed them either through change or in your little author notes. I cant wait to see you excecute the potential that a world like this undeniably has. *Gets back to reading*
Thank you. i would greatly appreciate it.
Oh, so you can write write? Haha for your very first book, the story is shaping up great and your descriptions and creativity are on point. Just keep writing and get that natural practice in and you will be a force to be reckoned with, with the capability of being a successful author on this app. Ill be keeping an eye on you for sure.
Yes i am from there. My book im writing is titled “Death Regulator” and is about a man who has immortality and gets a new superpower everytime he dies.
Noooo! You haven’t posted in a few and you have to keep going![img=faceslap]Your writing is very clean and extremely smart. Like, you’re good yo. And you write the tough stuff that people wouldnt event want to acknowledge in their books, which i do as well and love to see you nail it. You should be proud.[img=recommend]
Wow. I mean, most everyone else already said so much about the current story. I agree wholeheartedly, but I’d like to add, naturally. I think that the way you write the character’s personalities and dialogue just has a unique and genuine charisma to it that is so so important in a story such as this one. Congratulations, and PLEASE write more!:)
Wow, that was a very kind and well written review! Haha! Thank you very much.
Yep, I’m reviewing my own book. FIGHT ME, CASUAL! But in all honesty, I take a lot of time and show a lot of love for my writing. I’m not going to stop, so don’t fear a dead end book. Its also only ever lightly edited, so be kind please haha! THANK YOU![img=recommend]
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original Death Regulator
Humans have lived on earth unopposed and alone for thousands upon thousands of years. Finding mundane existence boring, they have created stories of magic and monsters to sooth their lucrative imagination for as long as history remembers. Arik was one of these very same humans. It wasn’t until tragedy struck his mortality that he learned just how wrong everyone truly is. Not only did he awaken from death, but he awoke with what he could only describe as super powers. The stuff of comic books. He was a deathless. Normally it would be all sunshine and rainbows, but Arik is inevitably brought face to face with others like him. Only they aren’t half as kind, and are intent on “eating” his super powers. The battle for his unlife is on. Can he make this second chance worth it?31 Chs 17 Collections
This exact reason right here is why I dont go around stealing old ladies purses.
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