Webnovel Author: saturrn - Fanfic Collection

I understand your point, and as someone who dabbles in writing their own fan-fic I get it. It's always your interpretation, and that is perfectly fine. Obviously, we're not going to get into the laws of physics that dominate the TOG and if they are the same or slightly different than the ones in the Narutoverse. I can understand the idea of intergration as well. A different soul should not be able to seamlessly use a new body without some practice, but you already said that he's integrated his skills. Sasuke is really fast, at the minimum, relatively light speed. Because he can fight a guy who casually dodges a light speed attack (Sage Art Light Fang). No one should able to touch Sasuke unless they are lightspeed level. That is unless you believe that TOG High Rankers are light-speed level, which is a debatable, except maybe Urek, who has hax. Again, great work so far. I'm not here to slander or really argue, I just couldn't understand a few aspects of the story so far. Thank you for your hard work.

Normally I wouldn’t bother, because this is a fan-fic, and the final interpretation is up to the creator but this is also weird in many ways. Here are some facts and you can double check the manga/anime. 1. EMS Madara can use his Susanoo blades to destroy mountain ranges. 2. Kurama with half his chakra can slap the other tailed beasts with little difficulty. 3. Tailed beast bombs are city-leveling attacks at the weakest. 4. Majestic Attire Kurama (EMS Cloak + Nine-Tails) is even if not slight weaker than sage-mode Hashirama at full power. 5. Single-Rinnegan Madara can smash his EMS self into the ground with barely a challenge, not to mention his double-Rinnegan form. 6. Six-Paths Sasuke and Naruto, scale above that already overpowered Double-Rinnegan Madara. 7. In Naruto the Last, Naruto himself admits that Sasuke is stronger than him and that information stays constant through the beginning of Boruto. 8. In the Last, Naruto can destroy the moon with very little effort. No matter how you want to dissect this, Sasuke can destroy the moon at the minimum. Let’s not forget how hax the Rinnegan is with Almighty Push and Pull, along with the ability to summon meteors, force animals into contracts, heal himself or anyone else from a near death state, and mechanize his body. Also his speed is insane. Minato has the fastest reaction speed and foot speed in the series. But Sasuke with Heavenly Hand plus EMS sharing a reactions could give that man a run for his money. (Though the is is my own headcannon.) Also, Sasuke has plenty of chakra. He certainly had enough to seal the tailed beasts in an INSTANT. He doesn’t have as much as Naruto, but he certainly has more than 99.999999% of all shinobi not named Naruto or Hashirama. So super-speed, moon-level destructive power, hax abilities, best swordsman in the Naruto verse (maybe Sakumo is better skill wise, but who knows), and a over 100 meter tall energy giant with wings that he can call upon at any time. Again, the story is up to to the author, but he has have nerfed Sasuke. If it helps the story that’s fine, but it doesn’t change the fact of what has already been explained in the manga/anime. *Just because you don’t actively destroy something doesn’t mean you can’t destroy it. Cell Saga, full-powered Super Sayian Goku can wipe the planet with a Kamehameha. Everyone freaks out when he charges it up. Obviously, the characters are holding back a portion of their abilities, but it speaks more about their control than their power. Indra’s Arrow was meant to kill Naruto, not vaporize the planet. Naruto blocked it, and the attacks cancelled out. Control is a part of someone’s strength, but it should never take away from their actual power. **If anime power-leveling makes no sense, here’s a real world example. A nuke can wipe a large city and its surrounding areas. A tailed beast bomb is the equivalent of a nuke…Take that as you will.

I’ve had a knot in my stomach about Camilla since the miscarriage. Zach has been a neglectful boyfriend, but he is not a bad one, just lacks communication skills. However, Camilla, who is older and is the one concerned about Zach’s lack of communication, goes on a trip with her mother without even sending a text or a call to Zachary. A trip where she would be unavailable except for Whatsapp. Now, maybe I’m reading to deeply into it, but this sounds like balogna. She can find a new guy, just break up with Zach and spare us the headache of having to read about her getting caught or Zach finding out. If any of y’all have ever been in a romantic relationship, then you understand that this situation is not normal. Unless she didn’t want him to find out at all. Again, a call or a text would have done fine. To Zach’s credit, he’s getting better, and is taking the relationship more seriously. Maybe the Emily’s initial worries were correct? Hopefully, the answer won’t make us want to throw our phones against the wall.

1st year in high school Yuki

Bar poor health or extraneous circumstances, I'll be back to posting weekly. Thanks for sticking around.

Honestly, it depends on what happens after his third year in middle school. A crossroads will appear, and Ryuu will have to make a choice.

I don't intend to. Especially since I find it enjoyable to write.

I was Team Yuki from the start of the manga. But…have you seen Aiko Etou? Personality wise, Yuki is incredible. Caring, devoted, and just wife material overall. But Aiko is akin to the hottest girl from high school, an unapproachable beauty. Anna doesn’t lose out either, she just has a rough start with Ryuu but quickly likes him. All three make for great choices, and I think it’s more of what your type is. As for me, my opinion is best described by the first line of the hip-hop group Rae Sremmurd’s song, “No Type”. “I ain’t got no type, bad … is the only thing that I like.” Take that as you will. And thanks for reading and commenting.