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JujumasterX
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Almighty thunder god
The rowdiness vanished as everyone was struck with fright by Niklas exuding his angry aura to the fullest. His body was still sparking with electricity, and now his sword was too. He calmly paced towards the exit, dragging the tip of the lighting blade behind him on the floor. Each of his eyes was replaced by a union of slithering electric sparks. Niklas looked godlike and frightening. The sound from the dragged sword's tip accentuated his figure as a domineering force.
Legacy: I gained power!
Fantasy 路 JUJUMASTER
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ch 13 Red back Hyena
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 13 Red back Hyena
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 13 Red back Hyena
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
The information is necessary for the story to progress. And the paragraph states that the story takes place in an alternate reality. I understand the angle you are coming from, and I appreciate your contribution. But my take on fiction is somewhat open-minded.
***Author notes: the events in this novel takes place on an alternate-reality-Earth. The setting is medieval. Mana, magic and myths are true in this reality. Have a good time, thank you.****
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
I incorporate elements from eastern fiction and western fiction. Second, the story is set on a very fictitious Earth. Why you should I limit characters name to European names?馃槀 I'm not even from Europe. Last and Importantly, it's my choice
***Author notes: the events in this novel takes place on an alternate-reality-Earth. The setting is medieval. Mana, magic and myths are true in this reality. Have a good time, thank you.****
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
Chapter is good.The story has potential.Keep it up and do a better job at punctuating sentences.
ch 0 1 I. The man who calls himself the S.O.D
The Astral world
Fantasy 路 DaoistsNzReX
yo, advice from me, don't use real word religious figures and objects in your novel. Twist them, like rename the religion, it's object and other affiliated things to it. This is to avoid drama that could get your book banned
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The Astral world
Fantasy 路 DaoistsNzReX
give a paragraph dedicated to your character making a speech. DON'T include it in the body of the story
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The Astral world
Fantasy 路 DaoistsNzReX
Instead say, "I was late to school." It sounds fluent.
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The Astral world
Fantasy 路 DaoistsNzReX
So, your college means highschool. i think you should use highschool. it's easier to understand. In some territories, college means university
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The Astral world
Fantasy 路 DaoistsNzReX
Also, don't forget to drop a review
ch 0 1 The Emperor of Camelot
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
Alright, what's the title
ch 0 1 The Emperor of Camelot
Magic era: war for supremacy
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
Americans would me proud
This was a high-quality Dark Fire Gem. It had the properties of fire and poison. It was typically used in embedding, whether it was on a weapon or a piece of jewelry. Once embedded, the Dark Fire Gem would have shocking destructive power that didn't depend on the strength of the user. Even in the hands of a 3-year-old child, it could kill ten strong, robust men like Jimmy.
End of the Magic Era
Fantasy 路 Zhuang Bifan
I don confirm馃槃
The pure and elegant girl looked down at the huge golden retriever and, without minding the question, answered with a slight smile, "450 pounds."
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy 路 Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
for real
"You are a Fool who keeps his word."
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy 路 Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
I'm on discord. I will share my Discord ID later
ch 22 Good news
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy 路 JujumasterX
spoilers?
After the demise of his parents, Quinn had not had any family members to support him. He had lacked the means to buy even the cheapest ability book and as far as he knew his family had not been special enough to be an Original.
My Vampire System
Fantasy 路 JKSManga
Diablo, Lux's first Named Creature and trusted companion, pointed its sword at the Dark Draugr's face and moved it in a taunting manner.
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy 路 Elyon
馃槀馃槀馃槀
Niklas barged in on the two people he came to save having sexual intercourse. The man pulled up his pants, and the lady pushed down her gown, hiding her face in embarrassment.
Legacy: I gained power!
Fantasy 路 JUJUMASTER