The overall idea and is great, but the delivery and grammar is deplorable. I hope you can fix this, and turn this from a rough diamond, to something quite fantastic.
Fantasy · Sectra
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The overall idea and is great, but the delivery and grammar is deplorable. I hope you can fix this, and turn this from a rough diamond, to something quite fantastic.
The Incomparable
Fantasy · Sectra