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You know, looking back into my life, it was horrible.
No one had thought to tend to me. No one gave a second glance once they walked past me.
Father’s dead...
Mother’s dead...
Same as everyone around me, but all that changed when I was chosen. Chosen by who? “HIM” of course.
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Author here giving myself a 5 star... Anyway I want to thank you for taking your time to read my book, and although this is my first work I am happy to share all these different emotional roller coasters with all my readers. I know that the grammar/translation on the first 7 chapters are not the best but I promise it will get better. Once again Thank you very much :)
The overall idea and is great, but the delivery and grammar is deplorable. I hope you can fix this, and turn this from a rough diamond, to something quite fantastic.
I normally don't read fantasy but I made this an exception because there's something about this story that'll grab your attention once you start reading. the writing quality is great. character design also great. I think the brackets are not necessary though, the sentences are okay without them. author has done a good job with this. well done
Interesting mix of game characteristics and mythical elements. Nicely written dialogue and smooth development. I think it would best to write numbers with letters instead of symbols but thats minor. Keep up the good work.
This looks interesting so far, and I look forward to seeing where this goes! There are some issues with the writing quality, but the concept has a lot of potential. I will say that I would like to see more of what the MC is thinking, but judging from his actions and thoughts I like him.
This is a good story. It has great Translation, awesome stability, The story development is not too rushed and I can keep up with what is going on. Keep up the Great work
Finally!!!!! I have been waiting for this book to be able to be voted for so I can support the author. -----------------------------------------------------