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The beginning of the story is backwards. You completely breezed past the Mc transmigration and sqeezed it into 1 paragraph?? Also the writing quality is so poor. Have you considered using chatgpt to spell check and make sure the chapters aren’t in 3 different tenses 💀

Im just annoyed because the comments made it seem like this was a good story but it’s not LOL. Also this story it NOTHING like classroom elite.

From chapter 700 onwards the translation becomes flawless.

This is what I thought but the story does get ALOT better. There is a reason why it is so popular

This book was great up until chapter 500 and tolerable till 800 and I just can’t continue. its a whole lot of what the actual heck is this storyline? I think the author is very confused.

I feel that the first chapter is too weak I almost stopped reading there. I think the story should have started with Liam dying and talking about how much he failed in life and how he had lost everything. Then it should have jumped o him being bullied. Also when they are moving houses it threw me off how quickly and unrealistic it was. They basically moved houses in one day even if it’s just a short paragraph mention how Liam cashed out the in-game currency to real money and then looks for houses and contacts an estate agency. Also if Liam is so cynical of people why would he let some random neighbour he met basically look after his sister on the first day they met Also how old is Liam and his sister???

Btw I read all 700 chapters in 2 days 😳 that’s how good it is

I did not like this book at first and thought the author was an idiot, but since I had nothing else to read I carried on reading. The development of this book is insane and the writing is excellent I love all the characters and this is now one of my favourite books I can’t stress enough how this is a MUST READ. Best example of don’t judge a book by its first few pages 😂😂

Extremely descriptive story with almost perfect grammar but a very slow read. The author goes into exteme depth with their descriptions to help the reader build an image, but for me its too much. If you’re someone who likes detail but wants a relatively paced novel this is probably not for you. You will find yourself passively scrolling through the book to get to the point because the author spends whole chapters describing one thing.

Im extremely picky with Grammar when reading, but the Grammar in this book Is pretty good. Though there are a few mistakes with tenses ect, Its very tolerable for the most part. There is a Sh** load of detail in this story, like alottttttttt its almost insufferable honestly. The author could probably describe a building for 2 whole chapters. Im already on chapter 43 and i have no clue where this story is going or what the end goal is other than the ‘holy mission’. Obviously if you’re into detail and this ‘holy mission’ this novel is probably for you. However if you’re looking for a novel with a strong plot/ some hint of direction and fan service you probably wont make it past chapter 10. But if you’re willing to continue reading to discover this plot maybe you will come across a gem. I dont know though because im stopping here lol!

Writing quality is great, little to no grammar mistakes, but the story not so much. If you’re interested in an idiot op mc who stupidly pretend to be weak and nauseatingly kind this is the story for you.