Webnovel Author: the_g00d_guy_ - Novel Collection

i will look into re-edits. I defintely want to expand the story so i most likely will need to change some chapters to make better sense when i add to the story

i will re-analyse and see what changes i can make

I love the intensity of the story. I was routing for the protagonist from the very start. Waiting to find out what he would discover next. i think some small grammar fixes can be done. Also some sentences can be adjusted to be slightly more dynamic. For instance: My pain in the leg was overruled by my adrenaline rush. Can be switched to: The supercharged adrenaline rush overpowered my throbbing leg. Or a straight forward sentence like: It took me close to half an hour to reach where I first came to be Can be switched to: It took me the better half of an hour to find my original starting point There's only a few of these but i love the story so far. Your experience shows and i look forward to completing the rest of the chapters. Awesome job