Webnovel Author: ChineseChung - Fanfic&Novel Collection

To let others know I only got to chapter 20 or the beginning of volume 2 so take this as you will. Writing Quality: Perfectly understandable and legible unlike most fic on this site. Updates: regularly and without significant gaps. Story: The story overall is filled with inconsistencies and added plot armor at times just to make the MC more competent than he really is. The MC gets bitten by a spider but instantly gets a power up and after the initial conflict is over he collapses from the bite and has the classic Spider-Man transformation growing 2 inches. The MC also goes to the wreckage of Steve Trevor for some reason and saves him…? He had no reason to save Steve as from the looks of the plane he can get some basic info of which version of DC he is in with the plane being outdated from his time leading to the assumption that he is in the past no need to expose himself to Steve for an unneeded conversation. Character: not my cup of tea, he has hero syndrome and constantly contradicts himself. He was said to be a man of his word but goes back on it The author added a whole persona shift that doesn’t really sink in. He was a villain an assassin who got transmigrated into DC and now he has a hero complex? He is supposed to be this badass assassin but fall short in multiple categories from prideful and slow witted to an overall contradicting character. He try’s to rely too much on others and gets himself stuck in bad situations. Another thing I didn’t care for much was how the author to pass of his ‘heroic’ traits just said that miles morales template was affecting him more than he thought. If the MC was so badass before the transmigration he would notice the changes in himself almost immediately. Thankfully I can say the one thing he isn’t is bland, so other opinions may vary. World: Nothing new to DC and overall all good if slightly average. Decent enough concept and average execution, overall I’d say give it a read or at least the first couple of chapters to see if you like it or not and hopefully the authors sees this because my message to him is good job and keep it up because while this story doesn’t align with my taste it’s at least something and you tried which is a lot better then most can say.

Writing quality is good for this website and I can understand what the author wants to convey. Updates frequently. Story development: Feels forced with all the cuts and jump and with the MC clearly knowing the future and wanting to change it he could but waits until the most inconvenient timing. Character design: Dogshit. The MC is a simp that never changed and even after hundreds of millions of years his personality wasn’t affected at all… This is also the same man who is constantly saying or thinking about Riveria but doesn’t do anything. Lets himself be belittled by a elf king when he’s legit a primordial god… and it can’t even be attributed to the fact that he’s ‘sealed’ because he clearly uses his divinity to open a portal to Mushoku Tensei. World Background: Average. Noting that stand out too much but gives a good grasp on the world around them. Overall I personally don’t like this story especially with Paul and Rudeus getting allowed into his familia and the author using a cop out where he can make portals to other worlds. Honestly no point in going back to the Danmachi one when he can explore so many more.i could go on but ehh… not for me and if you’re reading this at least give it a try if you like typical OP Japanese protagonist who doesn’t act OP.

I tried I really did, but this was too much for me, I read up to chapter 23 before having to call it quits. The Writing quality is legible and flows well enough, so no complaints in that department and it's updated regularly from what I saw, but the story development was pointless. It was the exact same as cannon plus an inserted character. For character design the MC is cringe inducing at times and funny at other, but he's just a gag at this point because with a Meliodas's Demon Physique and a 1.5 year head start he's only one stage above Arthur. Finally the world background is average noting new from what I read nothing really new, besides Elizabeth being inserted as Tess' Twin sister... yeah idk what I was expecting, but it wasn't this. It's not for everyone, but give it a try and you might like it. Also the forced relationship development between Tess and Arthur? She was interested in him because he saved her in this pic Meliodas saved her so...?