The protagonist's lack of emotion and interaction with others makes the story uninteresting. The story is just following the original direction and no originality. There's no noticeable difference. Writing needs improvmements.
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Anime & Comics · XElenea
Your idea is good, but the writing needs improvement. If you fix it, I'll read the story.
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The protagonist's lack of emotion and interaction with others makes the story uninteresting. The story is just following the original direction and no originality. There's no noticeable difference. Writing needs improvmements.
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