Think on the good side, it's only a hiatus and not the story stopping forever. I will come back to post more chapters someday, but until then I'll be focusing on another one I'm about to make (because I can't stand not writing anything). Maybe the new story will even have a few Undertale aspects in it, who knows.
Since I started posting this story, I have only received bad news and it ended my will to continue writing it (among the bad news: a family member died{Suicide}).
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
( Written with the help of the translator ) I like that one. He is following an interesting pace and he is only saying what is necessary to facilitate his new life in this world, instead of telling her that her existence was decided by a Human with a pencil and paper. Overall, continue with the good work author! If you want a hint from me, try to ignore the complaints of the Protagonist getting too low (kneeling and serving) or saying certain information. It takes a decent interaction for a story to develop. Soon, it is perfectly fine everything you have done so far, just avoid exaggerating too much in the actions more 'servants', because it can end up crossing the line sometimes.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: "My name is..."
Anime & Comics · rosasola
I don't think it's considered a harem.
There, just like everyone wanted, well, I really wanted the rabbit goddess, but is two already considered harem? I dont think so right?
Anime & Comics · LazyTanaka
Same Here*
"I want a Spear! I want the one Odin has - Gungnir!"
Anime & Comics · An1x
Right here. In the work of the Spear Hero (made especially for him), this spear can even make him Immortal and go back in time :/
"I want a Spear! I want the one Odin has - Gungnir!"
Anime & Comics · An1x
I’m being completely honest. I was looking for some good fanfiction that involves the Omnitrix and finally found one, thank you so much for doing this work. So far she has shown herself amazing, I hope to see more chapters in the future.
ch 11 Learning to Speak
Anime & Comics · Helix_Tower
''( If the message is confusing, I’m sorry. ) Both have extreme weaknesses that can be exploited. Undyne cannot remain in that mode for long, and if she is killed before she can become determined enough, she does not even enter that mode. Sans, as long as you don’t touch his brother, he won’t act as harshly as in the genocide route. He’s someone extremely lazy. Doesn’t mean you're gonna get away with killing some monster. Overall, as long as you don’t try to kill anyone, Undertale can be solved solely with conversation (including Chara, Asriel and Frisk).''
ch 0 2 The ruins
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
Something like that. I’m not sure yet because the pair for the Protagonist is not yet set in my mind. But the character who is winning agaist all the others easily so far is Chara. By chapter 15 I must have decided the pair.
ch 0 5 The End of the Ruins - [ Book Maker ] (3/3)
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
Instead of these things, they’re bones.
( A/N: Take this, use as reference... )
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
It would be better if he had a domain, there are several ways to break this technique if he has to take people to a 'different dimension' or something like that.
Do you guys have any idea about his Bankai abilities? Don't really know what would be good, so please help this poor lad.
Anime & Comics · CalmNature
Something like that.
Do you guys have any idea about his Bankai abilities? Don't really know what would be good, so please help this poor lad.
Anime & Comics · CalmNature
( Written message with the use of Translator ) 'Ying' and 'Yang' is basically the beginning of everything. It would be interesting for Bankai to have a 'limited area' where it could both control projectile attacks from opponents (example: if they use long distance jutsus on it), and also allow it to manipulate the terrain at will. A small example: He could modify the property of the earth within this 'limited area', causing it to cause some additional effects to the opponent such as the inability to use beam jutsus (ray chakra would be absorbed by the earth within this limited area). And obviously this would not only be limited to land, it could also be used in the air and in all other materials within that 'limited area'. I don’t know if it’s really a good idea, but I can see thousands of uses for a bankai like that. (not to mention that this would be insanely strong in Bleach’s own universe)
Do you guys have any idea about his Bankai abilities? Don't really know what would be good, so please help this poor lad.
Anime & Comics · CalmNature
Soon you will find, probably in the next chapter.
ch 0 4 The End of the Ruins - ???? (2/3)
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
( Written on the translator, I’m almost sure it got a little confused ) The death of both would serve to break the cliché of how Aruto fanfics work. Most fanfics either save Japan and Japan, or they leave them alive and change almost nothing in history. With the death of Minato and Kushina the story would go to a more 'original' rhythm since this would not only serve to make the MC stronger, but also to mature. It is recommended that if you go to kill them, make it a situation where the MC can face reality and understand - even more, if he already understands a little - that the ninja world is not just about getting stronger and the rest is a sea of flowers. I believe that the death of both (who are friends of the MC) should add a lot to the growth and maturation of the CM. This could also somehow serve as a trigger for the MC to get even stronger, or even awaken something in their death. ( If I’m not mistaken all the powers that the CM began, always added something when its original carriers were lost in anger or despair. Zanpakutou: Reiatsu and stronger techniques. Accelerator: That state Berseker. And things like )
(Guys Question Time: Should I let Minato die? and Kushina? Both die or both live? one dies one lives? Actually, I wanted them both to die so our MC can steal all of their abilities. But I thought about it and thought I could steal Fuinjutsu from Mito as she should be more knowledgeable)
Anime & Comics · CalmNature
I will follow suggestions from readers as long as they are acceptable suggestions.
- You are in a world called 'Dusttale', a variation of the 'Undertale' world. In a simple summary, an important and strong character went mad and started killing everyone.
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
I remember seeing Axetale on some random website. The only comic I had ever seen showed the incredible quality of this AU, which unlike the others, is mainly made to develop the story and everything else. Most of these AU’s created are to make 'The Strong Sans', Undertale’s Fandom is disappointing, but it’s always inspiring to find AU’s like Axetale, Dusttale, Flowerfell and others of that kind.
- You are in a world called 'Dusttale', a variation of the 'Undertale' world. In a simple summary, an important and strong character went mad and started killing everyone.
Anime & Comics · AprilFiction
( Written with the translator ) I believe that Jin Woo’s strength at the end of the novel only became limited because he decided to abandon the System and live a 'normal' life. In my view, it would have an unlimited (but very long) growth with the help of the System, which at no time showed a real limit. Not to mention himself and his shadows, which could easily get stronger and stronger. Generally speaking, the Jin Woo of the novel ending is not a true power in the DC world, but it could very well become one if it had not made the decision to abandon the System. At least that’s my point of view.
Shadow Monarch in DCAU
Anime & Comics · _Unknown_Being_