Webnovel Author: DeathlyRage - Novel Collection

Yes, not anytime soon though. You can say about 200 chapters in.

Shameless review here, as the author I'm confident my book is good enough for the majority. However, be warned about the MC's savage nature since his brutally may not appeal to everyone. Feel free to ask any questions you have.

Let's keep this as simple as possible, I saw this in the novel ranks and decided to give it a try, but I couldn't get past chapter 3. What put me down wasn't story related, rather it was the quality of the writing itself. First, large spaces here and there. You could try using the preview feature in your chapter publishing before publishing to improve that. Second, the grammar and spelling are simply bad resulting in a lot of question marks whenever I'm trying to read. Ex1: [A thousand years ago, they were defeated in the Demon-Human War and sealed here by the "Child of Destiny". They have not given up. Up until now, all along within these years, they still clung to life using the meagre resource, slowly recovering his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath.] All good until "slowly recovering", then what? You should have ended the sentence at 'slowly recovering' with a dot but what did the sentence after that mean? "his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath." Ex2: [They were starving, coldness with endless darkness rampant and they replicated themselves waiting for a thousand years.] No Comment. Ex3: ["Great demon king, I am the succubus demon Eileen, the enchantment of the demon race, our clan is willing to offer our essence for accomplish our king's fate"] She's an...enchantment? for accomplish? ------------ Other than that, the opening of chapter 3 is off as well. It just feels like a first-person POV then a third-person POV then a first-person POV again.