hiii, a novice author here~ I’ll update when I can~! ✨🦕
2021-04-23 Joined Singapore
Well, it would be the way he talks and looks, since he looks cold, inside out~ even his stares-
"Don't be too quick to judge Jennie~ you just heard it from people but that doesn't mean he is one." She said, making Jennie stare at her in disbelief but what can she say?
Fantasy · dinoriii
Vivian is a bunny, who can switch between a human form and a bunny form but most of the time she will be in her bunny form at school and out of school. Unless there’s a need to be human~ Its the same that goes for the rest, Jennie who is a bear and Gavin who is a werewolf (ETC.). They do have the respective ears and tails and they do wear clothes- I hope this makes sense and clears the doubts~! If there’s anything else your curious or confused about, you may ask away! ✨☺️
"Look, it's that pathetic looking bunny again~" Jake, that was a silver ranked bear with black hair, walked over to her as she slowly backed away until she hit a dustbin. She stared at each of them with fear in her eyes...
Fantasy · dinoriii
Oh, I use some fonts that come from font apps that are downloaded in my phone and added it into the phone keyboards~! ☺️
"Thank you for telling me Jen, I'll get going first." Without looking back, she left the dorm and walked down the hallways. 𝑾𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒅 𝒐𝒇 𝒓𝒖𝒍𝒆𝒔 𝒊𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔...𝒊𝒕 𝒅𝒐𝒆𝒔𝒏'𝒕 𝒎𝒂𝒌𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒚 𝒔𝒆𝒏𝒔𝒆.
Fantasy · dinoriii
Overall : the story was great, the synopsis was interesting! The story had the potential to be able to soar high! It is also very much recommended to those who would love to see a refreshing and unique story! Writing quality : the writing style was just as same as the other book and it was all fine and greatly unique! The flow/pace of the story was smooth, not too fast nor slow, making it easy for me to grip the understanding of the story better! Updating : the updates are stable and on track! Characters : the characters were described with great descriptions but it was just some bits here and there not too much. It would be good to describe all characters looks, personality and all in the story so we can get to know what they are like and it would do good for visualisation! But the conversation dialogues between the characters were interesting and it makes up for it all so it’s fine!! World background : there wasn’t much background descriptions(?) but there were some descriptions bits, here and there when describing about the things, surrounding and events that were in the story which was good enough to show the authors creativity use of great words! My thoughts : the book was such a great read! I got interested by the synopsis and wanted to know more about the book, the books contents were beyond my expectations and it was awesome! I hope to see more of both your books and wish you all the best! Good job author and keep it up!! ✨😊
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Urban · Leigh_Green