i write, sometimes. buy me a coffee! ko-fi.com/hibiscuslamp
2021-04-24 Joined United States
There's only one chapter out at the moment, but I can say that I love guilty pleasure stories such as this. Sure, there's many fantasy VRMMO stories out there, but not all of them are executed well. With the beginning lines of this novel, there seems to be some promise here. Keep on writing!
This book has been deleted.
I've just finished the prologue, but I can already tell that the story has promise. The main issue most webnovels have is readability. This problem comes before any other factor, and encompasses grammar, syntax, diction - how well the story flows. This story already stands out by flowing smoothly, and having a prologue that pulls you in RIGHT AWAY! Only a few chapters in, and I'm already invested in Renji's tale, and if he'll be able to survive the Death Dungeon..(and what those EX system skills mean!) Nice job Sir Author!
This book has been deleted.
solid story, I can tell that a lot of emotion was poured into the words, and that feeling definitely came across to me while I was reading it. the grammar can use a bit of work, but nothing that overtly stops me from reading. good worksies!
This book has been deleted.
how can window be french
I stared at him for a moment before turning away and walking towards the French window that looked over the city.
Fantasy · ThePotatoKing
I am sorry you feel disappointed
ch 0 6 Hello World(I)
Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp
thank you for reading!
ch 0 7 Hello World (II)
Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp
thank you for your kind words :)
ch 0 7 Hello World (II)
Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp
hello, author here :). this is my first time writing a story to show others, but I am very much passionate in making it an enjoyable reading experience. thank you for taking the time to check my story out!
The Villain's Magic (Dropped)
Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp