Webnovel Author: Jelle4Novels - Novel Collection

The chapters get longer later on. I didn't know what the wished-for length was for a chapter and thought of them as pages. I've also been thinking about reediting after volume 1 and will probably add more content about the 10 years walk. Thanks for the review!

Romance, Probably in volume 2. That's why its not an added tag yet.

It's a very interesting concept as it leaves a lot of possibilities for future chapters. The story is well written and there have already been some background lore that could prove to be a foundation for later chapters.

I also share your opinion that my chapters are way too short. That's something I slowly am trying to change as I start feeling more comfortable on how to write. Descriptions idem. I will probably go back and re-edit once I come to a point where the story could take a break (probably after first volume).

Each chapter is very well described while also keeping you interested. The conflict is realistic and the story flows well. Recommended to read.

Well written with good humor aspects to it. Also like your author notes, it makes us get to know you in a way. I have high hopes for this book.

The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.

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